and we lean in

Mar 14, 2010 03:44

Title: And We Lean In
Rating: PG-13
Category: Jane/Lisbon
Word Count: 1179
Disclaimer: Yeah, right.
Spoilers: Specific references to Red Hair and Silver Tape, Ladies in Red, and Carnelian Inc. In my head, this is set after Miss Red and before Red John’s Footsteps.
Summary: “Is that supposed to make me feel special?”
Author’s Notes: I was working on ( Read more... )

character: teresa lisbon, character: patrick jane, fic: the mentalist, pairing: jane/lisbon

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tidbit2008 March 29 2010, 21:07:29 UTC
Oh this is really cute, Grace. Nicely in character and light without being too light. Well done :)

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spyglass_ March 30 2010, 04:54:52 UTC
Thanks, bb!

Also, SN icon ♥

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anr May 21 2010, 10:17:29 UTC
I really enjoyed this; great story!

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spyglass_ May 22 2010, 00:01:35 UTC
Thank you :)

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firefish July 14 2010, 08:19:14 UTC
spyglass_ July 14 2010, 22:55:31 UTC
Thank you! Especially about the romancing thing, which just didn't jive with the rest of the fic IMO, and had to be cut from the original draft. I wanted to keep the tone somewhat even. Plus, straight up romance is admittedly something I don't write often.

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firefish February 25 2013, 20:16:29 UTC

icepixie June 4 2011, 06:14:12 UTC
This was really cute and funny. :)

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spyglass_ May 22 2012, 05:06:05 UTC
Thank you so much :)

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portions_forfox May 18 2012, 06:07:52 UTC
wow, this was flat-out adorable! I really love your dialogue, it's some of the cutest, most fun to read, clever banter I've read! God, your characterization is awesome.

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spyglass_ May 22 2012, 05:08:19 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)

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