How Deathly Hallows Should've Been

[for_a_fantasy]

I am doing a nine-part rewriting of scenes in Deathly Hallows, altering them as slightly as I can to make the story Harry/Ron instead of Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.

Title: How Deathly Hallows Should've Been - Part 1
Pairings: Harry/Ron, Ron/Hermione
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This is what Deathly Hallows would probably be like if J.K. Rowling was

Comments

[cassiopeia13]

Oh I like it! Keep going.

What's different in this last one? I can't remember the scene being any different than this. *tsks at Ron* so hotheaded. Must mean he's passionate. Harry gets it good I'm sure Haha

[for_a_fantasy]

Thanks so much! Here's what I changed in the third scene:

• “you know, with my arm mangled and nothing to eat and freezing my backside off every night and you two having all these cozy chats without me."
  
• Anger at both Ron and himself was coming to his defense now. In his pain to make sure Ron didn’t suspect Harry’s feelings for him, it seemed Harry had been leaving him out.
  
• “Yeah, he would,” said Harry, who did not want excuses made for Ron’s opinion. (slight changing of the wording there)
  
• “So why are you still here?” Harry asked Ron bitterly.
  
• “Go back to them, pretend you’ve got over your spattergroit and Mummy’ll be able to feed you up and Fleur’ll probably kiss - ”
  
• Ron made a sudden movement: Harry reacted instinctively,
  
• “Hermione keeps her word,” interjected Harry.
  
• “I get it. He chooses you. You choose him.”
  

[for_a_fantasy]

It's not much but if you ask me it makes a big difference. ;D

[sabine91175]

Really, really looking forward to the next chapter! Very nicely done!

[dane_wiltshire]

I kinda of did this when I read it. It's nice to see it in print...and how close our interpretations are. Very nicely done!

[for_a_fantasy]

Thanks so much! :D

[cherryoranges]

Well I can't wait until you continue! It's sure to be good. I liked this.

[for_a_fantasy]

Aw thanks! The next part should be up within a week.

[strickens_girl]

I really like this. Just subtle changes that make such a big difference. Great work. I can't wait to see more.

[for_a_fantasy]

I know! One of the reasons I'm doing this is to show how close Harry/Ron is to canon in DH. I think when reading this people will get some of JK's little hints that they didn't catch before just because now there are in a Harry/Ron setting.

Glad you like it!