Comments | footie_100: title: Secrets; team: FC Bayern München

txorakeriak in footie_100

title: Secrets; team: FC Bayern München

Jul 12, 2007 19:58

Title: Secrets
Author: txorakeriak
Team of Choice: FC Bayern München
Prompt: Caution
Pairing: Martín Demichelis/Daniel van Buyten
Rating: PG

( Secrets )

character: martin demichelis, team of choice: bayern munich, author: drbillbongo, prompt: caution, character: daniel van buyten

Comments 10

wispykitty July 12 2007, 18:21:14 UTC

:O Wasn't quite expecting this one out of you but oh wow it was gorgeous. <3 And hooray for the 5/6! And it just felt cautious, the overall feel of it. Very well done my dear. :D

txorakeriak July 12 2007, 18:59:37 UTC

Whee! Thank you! There needs to be more 5/6, definitely! :D

Wasn't quite expecting this one out of you
May I ask why that is? *doesn't quite understand*

wispykitty July 12 2007, 20:14:37 UTC

I meant it in the way that they appear to be competing with one another to the public. I would have expected more of them bonding and competing as a pair against Lucio, rather than them openly appearing as competitors. :)

But that's what gave this a different feel. There was more tension to it for me because I know how much of a bond you feel they have. And I hope you understand what I mean... :D

txorakeriak July 12 2007, 20:21:15 UTC

Well, I'd love to see them competing as a pair against Lucio, but that's not quite realistic, considering that all Bayern officials have already said that Lucio will have a regular berth next season. And he's not even joined training yet. They're pretty serious with him, and there's no way Daniel and Micho are oblivious to that. I just can't see them believe they can get past Lucio when the whole Bayern management and coach staff supports him so completely.

But we all know that between the sheets, this doesn't matter in the least. *winkwink* ;)

bustedflush July 12 2007, 18:35:01 UTC

This is AWESOME.

(Every time I read one of your pieces this week, I think "God damn, he found yet another perfect wrinkle in this prompt." Can I borrow your brain for a while, maybe?)

txorakeriak July 12 2007, 19:02:40 UTC

Thank you so much! :) I love finding new meanings to words - it's like sailing a ship into yet undiscovered lands, always fascinating. :)

Unfortunately, my brain has been on holiday ever since I can remember - or can't remember, rather XD - so I can't really lend it... I would, of course, but I have no clue where it is! I suppose it's in some dirty gutter somewhere... *LOL* But brains are overrated, anyway. ;) If you find it, you can keep it! *wink*

bustedflush July 13 2007, 18:52:15 UTC

You've totally convinced me, man. Shit, I'm ready to stop looking for my own brain at this point ... (:

txorakeriak July 13 2007, 20:25:42 UTC

Hehe, excellent idea! Once you've got accustomed to it all, I promise you won't even miss it. ;)

lhuneldaiel July 12 2007, 20:36:48 UTC

You've painted a perfect characterisation in only 100 words, even for me who doesn't know much about these two. Very good, my dear &hearts

txorakeriak July 12 2007, 20:38:36 UTC

YAY! Thank you! *glomps* I'm so glad you read this and liked it! :)

If you want to find out more about the pairing, there's always this - I know that the activity has already been posted ages ago, but I so had to participate.