Two drabbles, Juventus

[zimena]

I'm doing a fic challenge with this pairing, and this week's prompt here at footie_100 seems to fit almost any sort of fic, as long as I'm allowed to go with the "here-and-now"-interpretation of it. Hope you don't mind the fluff, which is an unusual thing from me :-P

Title: Stay
Pairing: Vincenzo Iaquinta/Pavel Nedvěd
Rating: PG
Prompt: Present
Author:
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Comments

[labyrinthically]

Ahh, these are both lovely!

[zimena]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked them.

[lhuneldaiel]

I wouldn't call it fluff! It's beautiful, tender, and has that bittersweet feeling of 'forbidden' about it (which is something I absolutely LOVE).

[zimena]

Awwww. Thank you. You know, perhaps it just seemed fluffy to me because it's so different from my usual, more angsty stuff. But what you said is indeed a huge compliment, as I'm not much for the "pure fluffy" stuff myself either. Thank you for the wonderful words.

*re-reads comment one more time*

[lhuneldaiel]

You're welcome :D
That taste of forbidden is angsty in itself, maybe in a different way, but it causes tension. The fear of being exposed as lovers, but being unable to resist one another and grasping every second to be together, knowing it's delicate and dangerous. Love that stuff. And you captured that perfectly.

[stern_suedens]

oh, these are beautiful... *sigh*

the first one is so powerful - making even a bright sunbeam something melancholy. wow. this one just says so much!

A moment later, they dissolve and become meaningless.
I really love that part - what a beautiful phrase!

I wish I could find words as beautiful as yours, sorry for the lame comment *sigh*

[zimena]

Wow - lame comment where? I didn't see that! In fact, this comment was lovely, because it was so detailed, and you even took the time to pick a favorite part/line.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting - and with such lovely words, too. That definitely made me happy!!!