Two drabbles for Argentina

[stern_suedens]

Title: Hoeneß' Unwitting Present
Author: stern_suedens 
Team of Choice: Argentina
Characters: Your favourite Bayern Stars
Prompt: Present
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Figment of my own twisted imagination

Background: Last season Bayern Munich spent nights before games, even home games, in a hotel. When Klinsmann came in as new coach, he did away with this practice.

Comments

[zimena]

First: ♥

Wonderful drabbles! The first one was so creative - funny and cute, but kind of hot at the same time, when thinking of everything that's being said between the lines there.

As for the second one:

The Argie teammates had sex like they played football

...perfect line, really. I could as well just quote the rest of that paragraph, too, because it was really magical, the way you described it.

[stern_suedens]

Oh wow...

♥ right back to you! *glows*

I'm glad lots managed to escape from between the lines in the first one... and just in case, I coloured in some detail in the second. Glad it met your fancy!

*hugs from Munich*

[lhuneldaiel]

Your drabbles are such a joy to read! There's always a little surprise hidden in them, and they're clever and sexy at the same time.

They didn’t make love. The Argie teammates had sex like they played football - fighting for every point, giving all they had, pushing the limits; yet not giving up until both had reached their goal.
One of the best lines I have ever read in fic. Seriously.

[stern_suedens]

wow - coming from you, that means a LOT!

*hugs*

[txorakeriak]

The first one made me giggle! Not just because of the fact that Lucio might just be the only one (or part of a very little group) that is sleeping in empty beds before away matches, but also because of the way you wrote Klinsmann here. A bit like a doting father, loving his kids to bits and not being able to be mad at them for anything. Oh, and you rock for including Hoeneß in this - the look on his face would be priceless if he found out what his team is doing in those hotel rooms... XDDD

And the second one... GUH. I love those two together. I love the thought of Micho going commando and being turned on by it. (Mmmh, I can so see that.) And that sentence everyone else here quoted is perfection. *fans self*