"Rain", Juventus

[zimena]

Title: Rain
Author: zimena
Pairing: Vincenzo Iaquinta/Pavel Nedvěd
Disclaimer: I'm a worthless liar, and I don't believe that this ever happened. No harm or disrespect intended.
Rating: PG
Prompt: Cold
Team of choice: Juventus.

Comments

[lhuneldaiel]

Lovely! The last two sentences say it all :)

[zimena]

Thank you. You know, writing fluff is unusual to me, but these two just ask for it, so I had to try. I'm glad you liked!

[zimena]

Thank you. I'm glad it came across okay, as I have a little obsession with this pairing now.

[stern_suedens]

The sudden rain had made his clothes stick to his body; white silk clinging tightly to him
When I read this I was thinking "gee, since when do they make their uniform shorts out of silk??"

Silly me, these lines conjured up images of wet white uniforms clinging to all kinds of things... bad, bad me...

What a beautiful drabble, though - even through it turned out other than how I expected! *blushes*

[zimena]

Haha - your first interpretation made even me blush, since I had not been thinking along those lines at all. Perhaps for another time...?

Other than that, thank you for the warm words. I'm glad it came across okay, as I'm rather obsessed with this pairing at the moment :)