Two Drabbles; Team of Choice: Inter

May 24, 2008 13:29

Title: Seconds
Author: great_whatsit
Team of choice: Inter
Prompt: Touch
Character: Cyril Rool
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Lies.
Note: Two more for roadtoharmony, she of the prompty goodness.

Seconds )

character: cyril rool, author: great_whatsit, character: tomas ujfalusi, character: zdravko kuzmanovic, team of choice: inter, prompt: touch

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great_whatsit May 24 2008, 21:20:25 UTC
*glomps back like whoa!* Thank you, Conny! I = so, so happy you like the Cyril one, esp since you're one of the few others who actually knows who he is. That one was the main struggle-source -- it was rewritten and reorganized about 10 times, give or take.

Heee. (In my head, the thing with his captain has a lot to do with how Deki is around him, sort of unconsciously; Ujfi's totally different. (Yes, I have thought about this way too much.))

YOU ARE SO VERY WELCOME! Thank you for the prompting, since I cannot write anything without them! *hugs*

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great_whatsit May 24 2008, 22:26:43 UTC
(I'm totally embarrassed to have thought about this, and I don't have the details exactly sorted out. But in the Kuzi/Deki world in my head, they were rooming together early on, and Kuzi said something harsh to him, and Deki had this instinctive, submissive response. He caught himself almost immediately, but there was this moment of comprehension and "Holy ... " from Kuzi, and comprehension and "Ah FUCK" from Deki. And the rest is historyinmyhead.)

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labyrinthically May 25 2008, 06:33:29 UTC
The first one is beautiful.

The second one is awesome. I wish Ufji wasn't leaving :(.

I can't stop automatically loling at this everytime Kuzi is mentioned anywhere now, though.

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great_whatsit May 25 2008, 13:55:58 UTC
Thank you, thank you! (You and me both. I just hope he's successful in Spain, as long as he doesn't flop I'll feel ok about it.)

Best. Picture. EVER.

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