The Gravy Train; Team of Choice: Germany

[stern_suedens]

He emerges from the marble bathroom wrapped in a luxurious bathrobe; pads barefoot across the impossibly deep carpet to the window.
The view from his suite is incredible, the city laid out before his bare, stubby toes. Not long ago, swinging his hammer under the burning sun, he’d never imagined such a world, let alone pictured himself in

Comments

[hallucinogenia]

Those last two lines are really pretty awesome. I liked this.

[stern_suedens]

*blush* thanks for the comment! :)

[txorakeriak]

This is wonderful. I can't believe it's just 100 words, really! There's so much between the lines, and I love your portrayal of Franck. He knows what it's like to have no money just as well as he knows what it's like to have loads of it, and you captured his dilemma perfectly. The ending is awesome, too. I had to snicker at his decision because it's totally what I would have imagined him doing. :D