Comments | footie_100: two drabbles, team of choice: ac milan

caydelaura in footie_100

two drabbles, team of choice: ac milan

Mar 07, 2008 13:10

Title: Can you feel me?
Author: caydelaura
Team of choice: AC Milan
Prompt: [Hey Ya]
Pairing: Paolo Maldini / Filippo Inzaghi
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not true
Notes: written for finnygan.

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prompt: [hey ya], character: lionel messi, author: caydelaura, team of choice: ac milan, character: filippo inzaghi, character: paolo maldini

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finnygan March 7 2008, 15:47:16 UTC

♥

(No, I'm not coherent enough to say anything else right now.)

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finnygan March 7 2008, 15:59:02 UTC

Angsty is good, when it's done this well. (And I gave you a Pink Floyd song - angsty is probably also inavoidable.) It's just really, really wonderful, darling.

*Pipposnuggles*

stern_suedens March 7 2008, 16:19:21 UTC

Oh... the second one... oh...

... it's so sad, but so beautiful. I'd squeeze Leo if I could - wouldn't we all???

bustedflush March 7 2008, 19:48:11 UTC

Ooooh I love the tone of the first, it seems a very different take on things, and on the dynamic between the two of them. I like!

And oh, poor Leo! God, the second one is so vivid, Conny, you get to his emotions so well. &hearts]

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bustedflush March 7 2008, 20:50:22 UTC

I would say the angst worked for you very well, you can't tell there was any trouble at all.

I understand the fretting, it's hard to avoid with these bloody footballers. *hugs*

[I owe you about 1000 replies, but I'm currently freezing in Texas (!?!?!) and desperately need a nap. Then I have a date with my old coworker Karen's famous rum punch. (HOORAY.) Point being: You many not hear from me again before I wildly drunk. Beware.]

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