Comments | footie_100: 3 drabbles, Juventus

barush in footie_100

3 drabbles, Juventus

Feb 06, 2008 19:10

You’ve let him into your life. You’ve given him permission to share everything with you and now you can only regret it. He’s not so gentle and delicate as he seemed to be. Neither witty nor friendly. It really isn’t any kind of pleasure to be near him anymore.

You’ve tried to convince yourself such behaviour was normal in England. However, he hasn ( Read more... )

prompt: permission, character: frank lampard, author: barush, character: pavel nedved, character: karel poborsky, team of choice: juventus, character: petr cech

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summertime826 February 6 2008, 19:24:50 UTC

ahahaha - i LOVED your two versions of frank! this is totally how i see him (with jt, of course!) - either rough when the mood strikes him, or a masochist just begging for it.

pavel - that is one hell of a random pairing. he's SO bottom.

barush February 6 2008, 19:43:32 UTC

Thanx, I'm glad you liked them =)) Yeah, Frank belongs with JT, no doubts about that, but I was trying to do something different for once. And I'm glad someone sees him in the same light as I do hehe

Well, 'random' is my middle name lol And Pavel *is* bottom, always =))

zimena February 6 2008, 21:30:27 UTC

First of all: THANK YOU AND DĚKUJI MOCKRÁT!!!!!!!

Really, I can't even begin to express how much I adore you for this. But as you know already, putting Pavel in fics/drabbles ensures automatic entry into my personal List Of Heroines, simply because he is all sorts of adorable, and I love him very much. But this is not news to you, I'm sure.

Either way, I love the first one, as you know already. I just wish it was longer than 100 words. Poor Pavel...is so incredibly pretty when he is hurt. Then, the last one....oh, it was so sad, but beautiful at the same time. And I can just see Karel feeling insecure and sad. Really, you almost gave me tears in my eyes here.

Then, the Petr/Frank one, it's nice to see you writing Frank like that, too. Like, so completely different from how you wrote him in the first one. And of course - Petr is very, very lovely.

Oh, and please - have a bit more confidence in your writing skill? Because you have made very nice work with these drabbles. I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff already :)

barush February 7 2008, 00:31:06 UTC

First of all: Není zač =))

Yeah, 100 words is too little. Maybe I'll make it longer and write abused!Pavel for you=)) Oh and Frank is just diverse, I can shape him into about anything and it fits=)

Thanx for your awesome comment, you rock <33