Martín captures Jose’s lips fiercely, crushing them together. His tongue demands entry and Jose grants it. Martín can feel the knees of the younger man buckle, overpowered by the feel of hard lips on his, the hands on his hips and the body that slides along his. Martín’s movements are almost frantic. Too long has he desired, suppressed these
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loved 'em.
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O_O
I can't... form a coherent thought. Those are heartbreaking, bittersweet, hot and beautiful at once, and I don't even know what to feel reading them. You captured the dilemma I'm currently finding myself in perfectly, because Micho/José is damn sexy and very obvious, considering how much time they spend together, but at the same time, Micho/Daniel will always be my first and biggest love, no matter what, and I feel for Daniel, oh yes.
*snif*
I love you for writing those. And especially for your descriptions of Micho. So much. ♥
I will now curl up somewhere and console myself with the fact that you didn't explicitly state that Dani and Micho are/were together and that maybe Dani will act upon what he saw in the locker room... Or that Hitzfeld will make him act to spare himself the drama. ;)
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Umm..*hides* there is a sequel now, you see? I am just not so sure it is to your liking *hides deeper*. But there is always another chance for them next week :-).
I am glad you liked them nevertheless. I had to think of you while I wrote them and I am sorry you have to curl up again now. But maybe the argentinean hotness can distract us somehow.
To be honest, had the deadline been a day or a few hours later, Daniel would have acted ;)
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Just found these in drbillbongo's awesome fanfiction archive (check his recent LJ entry for a link) and just loved them! Read them, died, re-read them, and died again.
They're so sad, but romantic, and somehow beautiful. And how you worked in Hitzfled just blew me away - so incredibly poignant - makes me love the man even more! *misses The General*
Have you written any other Micho/Dani? Would love to see/read more!
And if you're in the mood for some happy Micho/Dani, check out the link in the archive to "How it all began", a romantic fluff piece I did on 5/6.
:-D
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