Title: Persuasive, Brown, Team: AC Milan

[rose_of_rouen]

Title: Persuasive
Author: rose_of_rouen
Team of Choice: AC Milan
Prompt: Curious
Characters: Simone Inzaghi, Christian Vieri
Rating: None
Disclaimer: Obviously untrue

Comments

[withhook]

Drea/Rui Costa? More? more? more? more? more? more? more? more? pretty please...

I like the first one too, such interesting dynamics :)

[rose_of_rouen]

Is it a thumbs up for Andrea and Manuel then? I'm trying to work my way into their characters, so I am going to try and write some more stuff for them.

I'm glad you like the first of them as well, since they are both a bit experimental, thank you sweetie.

[lady_g]

I also like the second one very very much. It is written so...gentle, I think, is the best word. Wonderful! I just need to get to know the players better ;).

[rose_of_rouen]

Thank you so much. I am really pleased by your comment because you don't know the players well, I find it very hard to be objective about fics when they are about players that I like, so it's nice that you like this without that advantage.

[bustedflush]

The second has me very much looking forward to your cornerflag piece, Rose, I like the quiet intensity of it and, of course, the mention of Rui's eyes.

And the first is delightful, I like the way you've created such clear personalities for both of them in so few words.

[rose_of_rouen]

I'm glad that you think it works martha, I know that the point of the cornerflag fics are unusual pairings, but last time I found it quite difficult to write a pairing with no back story at all, I hope this doesn't break their rules.

Thank you, I haven't given up on trying to create some sort of identity for my fictional Simone that isn't completely in the shadow of his overbearing elder brother.

[pescagialla]

Rui Costa!

I love it when you're faltering like that. So sweetly hot. Please to falter more.

[rose_of_rouen]

Thank you my dear (great icon by the way, is it Botticelli?), I find faltering very, very easy, so I will falter some more,

[pescagialla]

No, actually it's Raphael meets Francesco Totti meets my liquor cabinet ;P

Bwaha, I'm glad you think it's pretty

[rose_of_rouen]

oh dear. I'm supposed to be studying Raphael. I'm definitely faltering there as well, but I do think it's pretty

[rose_of_rouen]

that is wonderful, to think that you can actually see the scene that clearly, thank you so much for commenting on that. I will write some more of the second pairing, I'm trying to feel my way into them at the moment.