Fic: Yours To Miss

Mar 27, 2012 10:26

Title: Yours to Miss
Author: fools_game
Bands (and/or pairings): PatD/Young Veins, Ryan-centric, gen with background Brendon/Sarah
Rating: PG-13 for cursing
Word count: 5040
Warnings: None
Summary: The invitation to Brendon’s wedding is stuck to his refrigerator with a magnet shaped like a brightly-coloured chicken. Ryan Ross is not in Panic! anymore. Ryan ( Read more... )

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jackycomelately March 27 2012, 15:57:24 UTC
I really enjoyed this. I particularly liked the coffee shop scene with Pete and how the effects ripple out.

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fools_game March 29 2012, 09:38:58 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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lalejandra March 27 2012, 17:03:29 UTC
I really like this story -- my opinion that it's incredibly sweet stands! Your Ryan is charming. :)

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fools_game March 29 2012, 09:40:53 UTC
I'm glad you like it! And seriously, thank you so much for the beta. I have gotten less thorough and balanced feedback from actual paid professional editors. You were super amazing.

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jedusaur March 27 2012, 22:13:19 UTC
I liked this a lot! Especially "it looks better on you anyway," that really hit home.

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fools_game March 29 2012, 09:49:11 UTC
Thanks for commenting! I feel like this Ryan maybe never wanted to be the famous rockstar, but was still kind of pissed about everything else.

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alasse March 28 2012, 23:03:26 UTC
Oooh, I really, really liked this. What a fantastic take on Ryan.

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fools_game March 29 2012, 09:50:14 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! I had never given Ryan much thought ("he's the one... with the scarves? Kind of mumbles?") but the mix was so lovely it inspired me.

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crowgirl13 March 29 2012, 22:34:20 UTC
I was going "Oh Ryan. :(" though most of this fic. The bittersweet tone and eventual healing here is perfect; I cried a bit with the rest of them at the wedding. This is the Ryan fic I didn't know I needed. Your characterization of him, prickly, awkward, stubborn but still coming around... ugh! I love it. Thank you so much for writing this.

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hesmagicandmyth March 31 2012, 08:47:38 UTC
That's kind of how I feel about it actually! It's the Ryan fic I didn't know I needed and her characterization is beautiful.

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