Legerdemain Chapter 9

[foolish_m0rtal]

Title: Legerdemain or The Enchanting of Charles East
Genre: Fantasy, Steampunk, Alternate History
Rating: PG- some swears. Ladies cover your sensitive ears.
Summary: In 1800s London-Aldwych, stage magic always comes second to the scientific and engineering advancements that are quickly becoming the new marvel of the age. But Charles

Comments

[mee_eep]

YAY update YAY

..going to bookmark this to read tomorrow :)

[foolish_m0rtal]

Yay. Please tell me when you finish. I am extraordinarily anxious about this chapter. I don't like it very much. I'm trying to write bits of it over, but nothing is sticking. Augh.

[mee_eep]

I like Charles jealous and drunk, giving away more than he'll have wanted to and missing many things in turn. Amused me how his moods changed.

Fletcher is intersting and has secrets of his own I think.

I'm no historian and read this as it's own world :)

What don't you like about it?

[foolish_m0rtal]

I dunno- it seems really dialogue driven, and although I dislike describing the stupid scenery in every single paragraph, my chapters usually have more world-building background and detail to them.

[broken_moons]

Ooh, I'd been waiting for this - great update! I especially love the hints about Fletcher's past :D

[foolish_m0rtal]

Yeah, he's our little man of mystery, isn't he?