Holiday Fic Exchange; If

[foobacoligist]

So this is my Holiday fic exchange fic, and it was written for someone who's name I'm not entirely sure of at the moment, because you see when I got the email, it said that I was writing for 'Cate' so I don't know if Cate is a username or a name, but either way Cate, I hope you enjoy XD

Comments

[niklj]

Hey what I read of this was REALLY cute, but could you put spaces between your paragraphs so it's a little more readable?

[foobacoligist]

sorry! this was my first time posting a fic onto LJ (normally I just link to ff.net) and I didn't realize how much it destroyed fics XD

[niklj]

Haha I had the same comment given to me the first time I posted onto FF.net XD Live and leaaarn.

I'm glad I came back to this story! Beautifully written and very subtle. Some points reminded me of Charles Dickens, I don't know why.

But anyway, can't wait to read more from you. Sooo well done.

[foobacoligist]

thank you! and I don't really care why this reminded you of Charles Dickens- it's a big compliment either way!

[iamshunpike]

I loved this! You really captured what it's always hinted at that Sam's home life must be like. And the DVD shopping! Freddie going along with the idea of it, and then watching, and then - the smiling bit. That was sweet and thoughtful and, besides the ending paragraph, was my favorite part.

Oh, and it doesn't affect the plot too much, but in America Boxing Day isn't celebrated, so there wouldn't be Boxing Day crowds at the mall. Definitely huge amounts of post-holiday shoppers would be there though, so it doesn't really change anything. It's sort of neat actually to see that in there because when you read it you get the sense of iCarly fans in different countries than the source material setting. :)

This was special. Adding to memories!

[foobacoligist]

thank you! and jeez, I guess you learn something new every day- I had no clue boxing day wasn't celebrated in America *feels like a sheltered Canadian* XD

[isawthephoto]

Hi! I'm Cate, btw.

This was gorgeous! I've always had the most sympathy for Sam out of all of the characters of iCarly. Not only is she dynamic in her own right, but there is so much that we don't see that this hints beautifully at.

I love the repetition of phrases like "If her glance remains on them, of course it means nothing," and "Neither of them will say anything." So well written and very, very accurate to Sam and Freddie. They're all about repressed emotions, no?

Anyway, I loved this, and I'm adding it to my memories! Thanks for a beautiful surprise!

[foobacoligist]

aww, thank you! I'm so glad you liked it :)

[alexfoster451]

I really liked this. It was sweet without being overly so. Thanks for sharing! :)

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