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followthesun1

"Dream a Little Dream"

Apr 02, 2008 22:21

Dream a Little Dream: A Zikki/Blofron One-shot

Disclaimer: Nope, I don't own anyone!

Dedication: To Dave, for his 21st Birthday! And to all the girls and boys on the Z/N thread on FF, Happy (belated) 69th Day!

Rating: Oh god, I don't know. R? More than R? Beats me ( Read more... )

hairspray, fan fiction, nikki blonsky, zikki, fan forum, zac efron

Comments 16

saint_seducing April 3 2008, 05:48:32 UTC

I'm not even going to guess because why compete against the best?

Now on to the meat and potatoes Dumpling!

I love this. Love. Because it's so them. Just everything from the mention of her pudge to the way you handled Madrid and Vanessa. It's easy and hard and PERFECT!

pearllane April 3 2008, 05:56:13 UTC

Jen! This is the shiz!! Seriously I love it all, the surprising, the peanut butter jokes, the smex, and most importantly the love! Great job with this little ficlet!!

harry_n_ginny April 3 2008, 05:56:51 UTC

It was worth the wait! It may have ended up a one-shot with smex instead of a smexlet but it was an AMAZING one shot with smex!!! I loved it!

I'm not trying the timeline thing I know Irish said something about Nov 22nd and the parade lol but I don't even pretend to know timeline trivia lol.

azzy_michelle April 3 2008, 06:11:19 UTC

*Applauds*

I loved it Jenn! Of course, the smex was great! :D
My favorite part would have to be:

“God, I love you,” he said against her skin as he returned to kissing her shoulder.

She tipped up his chin for him to look her in the eyes. “I love you, too, Zac.” The simple, honest love that he saw in her eyes made his breath catch in his throat. “And I want to be here every night when you get home this week. And we’ll find a way to see each other in Utah, or we can meet somewhere else when we can, because I don’t want to go this long without you again.”

It put me in complete awe!

Great job!!

rhythm_hearts April 3 2008, 06:24:22 UTC

Ugh! :THUD: I'm DED!! So sexy, funny, and genuine. Rocking chair sex FTW!!!

They laid on the bed, in each others’ arms, tears in their eyes, breathing in the same rhythm, for a long while. They did make love, but it was being in love, together in each others’ hearts, that came first.

That last line... so beautiful!! Bravo! Bravo!