Second "Deleted" Bathtub Scene

Jan 15, 2008 22:34

Second “deleted” bathtub scene, based on Kayla’s fic “Once Upon a Dream” (by daydreamer22688) This encounter takes place the night after the first deleted bathtub scene ( Read more... )

fan fiction, nikki blonsky, zikki, zac efron, hairspray, prince zachary, servant nicole, bathtub smex

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sgh_intern January 16 2008, 06:48:47 UTC
How the hell can you leave it there?

Oh my GOD!!!

floved it to bits and pieces

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followthesun1 January 16 2008, 07:10:01 UTC
Thanks! And, I do enjoy being a tease, so who knows. It may continue one day ;)

Did you catch the teensy Mr. Darcy line? Zac says it in the tub ;)

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sgh_intern January 16 2008, 07:13:33 UTC
"It will not do"

"In vain I have struggled, it will not do. You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you."

SO MUCH WIN!!!

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followthesun1 January 16 2008, 07:25:19 UTC
YAY! *applauds*

FLOVE BBC P + P!

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saint_seducing January 16 2008, 06:50:03 UTC
SWEET MOTHER OF PEARL!

That was fantastic. Completely worth the wait. Just, I think I fainted. Blackout from the sheer hotness of it.

*fans self*

*tries to form better review*

*can't because to busy fan self*

And is it wrong that I totally see Prince Zac as Zac from Details with stubble and scruffy but still royal like? Cause that's what I see when I think of him.

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followthesun1 January 16 2008, 07:11:42 UTC
Wow! I've never gotten a "Sweet mother of pearl" before! LOL

Oh, and stubble!Zac was written before the Details shoot came out, but TOTALLY how I pictured him anyway! The stubble and the hair, all in his face and kind of greasy (except here it's because it's wet).

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followthesun1 January 16 2008, 07:13:01 UTC
Maybe you could have some salve in your story. Even innocently, I'd totally laugh my butt off!

Well, your characters are hot and sexy and full of tension, so it's only natural they should get up to something in their alone time ;)

thanks for the seal of approval!

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glitterisblue January 16 2008, 06:53:47 UTC
Uh MORE!

Well I truly think I am DED now... but More!!!!

MORE! and maybe I'll come back to the forum :P

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followthesun1 January 16 2008, 07:13:47 UTC
Oooh, that's a lot of pressure!

But I really want you to come back! LOL

As a matter of fact, there IS a glimmer of an idea that I had...

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mrsmccord January 16 2008, 06:57:41 UTC
asd;gkjasfdg;khadsfg

OMFG. HOT. I'm actually blushing! lol

I know I said I was cool with you not writing a third part, but that was before I read this! I've changed my mind. But I promise not to bug you about it. I'll let everyone else do that! :P

I want to leave a better review, but my brain is melted from the hotness.

Suffice it to say, it was fabulous and smexy and wonderful and completely worth the wait. I loved every word. *hugs and kisses*

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followthesun1 January 16 2008, 07:14:50 UTC
thanks Baby! I love turning you into a pile of goo! LOL

Third part, huh? Well, as I commented to Anna, I do have a glimmer of an idea...

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