Blood-right

Dec 23, 2008 14:38

Angels! Angels!
Burning bright,
oh! the horrors
you ignite!
With gore dipped wings,
blood drenched hands,
you beckon me
to dead lands.
You touch my breast,
leave a mark
before, laughing,
you depart.
Leave me, dripping,
bloody tears.
Soon I am my
own worst fear.
A thirst for life,
dreams of death;
lost to me is
lasting rest.
Pain eternal,
ever cursed.
Killing, sighing...
death rehearsed.
They do not know
as I strike
that their blood is
mine by right.
Living goddess,
human half,
craves for blood-right.
Damn-ning fast!
I cannot love,
cannot care.
No one knows that
I was there.
There when Egypt
ruled the earth.
There when Rome fell,
there for birth.
Birth of so-called
Jesus Christ,
of Kings and Queens,
dark and light.
I will be there
every rise,
for every fall,
death revised.

Created before: June 2005
Last Edited: 23 December 2008

Notes: This poem is probably one of the ones that I worked the hardest on. Not only does it rhyme, but I actually counted the rhythm out: it's four beats and then three beats, repeated over and over. This poem combines two of my obsessions: angels and immortality. The original poem stopped after the lines "No one knows that / I was there." So, I'm not sure I actually like what comes after that, because I'm not sure it fits. Maybe I should have just ended it where it originally ended. It just felt incomplete where it originally stopped.

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