I just read this again. And I saw it-- I mean really saw. it is so visual. It seems so real. The part where Archie punches Horatio, and Horatio cries... I want to read a second time fic-- can I induce you to write one? If you don't want to do that I will read anything else you come up with!
Oh, thank you so much. Thank you for taking your time to comment again, I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. Seeing as the boys still have me under their spell, I will have to write more. I haven't contemplated a second-time fic yet, but I like the idea. It's a new kind of challenge that could be quite interesting. On the one hand, intimacy has now been established; on the other hand, it's not as though it's a smooth journey from now on. They still have to come to terms with how they feel.
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