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7 Deadly Sins - Gluttony by Mylodon

Oct 23, 2010 09:26

AUTHOR: mylodon
TITLE: Soft tack and a softer bed
SIN: Gluttony
RATING: PG 12
PAIRING: Archie and Horatio
WORD COUNT: 301
WARNINGS: None
DISCLAIMER: These characters are not mine, alas
SUMMARY: Shore leave is a time for indulgence

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challenge: seven deadly sins, rating: slash, character: archie kennedy, pairing: hornblower/kennedy, author: mylodon, fanworks: fanfiction, character: horatio hornblower

Comments 20

vsee October 23 2010, 18:45:41 UTC

Mmm. Lovely.

mylodon October 23 2010, 19:09:28 UTC

Thank you!

esmerelda_t October 23 2010, 23:30:44 UTC

I love the milk line, it really stands out to remind us that these guys really would have gone months without what we take for granted.

Scones, a soft bed, and Archie in it, sounds like my idea of heaven alright!

mylodon October 24 2010, 11:30:57 UTC

Yes. I thought long and hard about what that 'half forgotten' things would be and decided that milk was one of the things I'd miss most.

Scones, a soft bed, and Archie in it,
What a blissful thought.

stylissimo October 24 2010, 22:00:51 UTC

Food, time alone, soft bed, wine, two lovers, sweet kisses and languid love you wrapped this story with all of this and it's beautifully lyrical.
Thank you for writing it :)

mylodon October 25 2010, 08:59:57 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. I had such fun with this ficlet.

emeraldreeve October 27 2010, 11:26:03 UTC

So beautiful! Your words flow like a blissful poem.

mylodon October 27 2010, 18:37:19 UTC

Aw, thank you. I don't think I;ve been so pleased with a ficlet in ages.