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miss_aztec57 in foe_of_reality

Secrets Worth Keeping [15/15] (FINAL)

Mar 08, 2013 20:52

secrets worth keeping [15/15]

Pairings: Kris/Lay, Xiumin/Luhan, one sided!Taoris, Kris/Chanyeol (Tao/Chen)
Genre: High School!AU
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 5, 300
Summary: Wu Fan is the star player of the school’s basketball team and a known ladies man. But Yixing discovers that it’s not all quite what it seems.

prologue | one | two | three | ( Read more... )

kris/lay, fic: secrets worth keeping, xiumin/luhan, genre: au, chaptered, exo

Comments 103

miss_aztec57 March 8 2013, 09:53:54 UTC

spot for k8tunnie ♥ WHO HAS BEEN THERE THROUGH ALL OF MY STORIES AND WHO I LOVE SO VERY MUCH~~

k8tunnie March 10 2013, 11:58:21 UTC

Sorry I joined this party so late. I JUST RE-READ ALL THE CHAPTERS OMG FEELS ARE GETTING SO HIGH xD

Okay, I love the last chapter to every bit of it :") (and damn the nice extra). Yixing's father is so nice, and OMG his mother rocks. Mothers always are the best >3<

AND WU FAN FREAKING KISSED HIM IN FRONT OF EVERYONE *KEY SMASHINGGGGG*

AND THE LAST LINE HAHA OMG SO CHEESY BUT JUST LIKE I SAID ON TWITTER, CHEESY LINES AND CLICHES MAKE A PERFECT COUPLE AND THIS IS PERFECT xDDDDDDDDDDD

SERIOUSLY IT'S 41K WORDS OF FLUFF (WITH A SPRINKLE OF ANGST) LOL IT TOOK AROUND 3 MONTHS OR MORE FOR THIS FIC RIGHT O___O

AWW IT'S SO SWEET OF YOU BUT YOU KNOW YOUR STORIES WON MY HEART TOTALLY AND I LOVE YOU TOO, TOO MUCH xDDDDDD

P/S: just wondering but all five of your WIP are KrisLay? xDDDDDDDD

miss_aztec57 March 8 2013, 09:54:15 UTC

spot for chris_sie the most perfect son in the world ♥

chris_sie March 8 2013, 10:47:53 UTC

Why thank you, most perfect mama in the world :D
OMG I love how perfect and fitting it is that he said 'I love you' in English :D
Hehe I love how casual his parents are about it, and how his mum already knew...ah and Lu Han :D Lu Han! 'You guys are so cute' :D And Tao. I love how perfectly timed his snark is :D
and the end!!! *fangirls* Just so perfectly cute with Wu Fan doing the winning shot of the game and then kissing Yixing and ahh! And I love the last line, it's so cute and fitting and ahh! Perfect end to a brilliant fic, my dear :D

miss_aztec57 March 9 2013, 21:53:12 UTC

hehe ♥
yes well when I was writing it I just thought WELL THAT FITS NICELY and had to put it in!
I know right? lucky tbh. (But at least there was no more angst!)
thank you so much for reading this all of the way through and commenting on every chapter!
/hugs and kisses

miss_aztec57 March 8 2013, 09:55:23 UTC

spot for jaerotic who is the most flawless fanxing stan ever ;) ♥

jaerotic March 8 2013, 10:00:32 UTC

WAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT ( ... )

miss_aztec57 March 9 2013, 22:04:29 UTC

I ALREADY CRIED AT YOU ON TWITTER BUT /CRIES AT YOU AGAIN.

IDK. WHAT DO I WRITE IN MY LEAD UP TO FRIDAYS NOW?
its all very sad

haha I know I feel a bit sorry for them! they were so nice and accepting just after fanxing probably ruined their couch orz...

he did so well! all of that wonderful kissing tutoring from Wu Fan definitely helped xD thank you asdfghkl ^^

LMFAO CAN'T WE ALL TBH?

hah well that part was so easy for me to imagine bc I remember getting thrown around when I used to play netball, scraping my knee on the gravel courts which tbh, is probably worse bc you get bits of gravel stuck in your leg. ugh.

cheesiest of them all. but yes, its all good, because he doesn't care anymore!

aw im so glad! thank you so much for always writing such lovely comments on each chapter because they always managed to brighten up my day. and I know you've commented on my other fics before too, but this was the first fic we kind of got to know each other (until I randomly stumbled across your twitter lmfao) SO IT KINDA/SORTA WAS THE START ( ... )

miss_aztec57 March 8 2013, 09:56:05 UTC

spot for nythera_ko ♥ (who always writes such wonderful comments!)

ext_1584421 March 8 2013, 12:47:46 UTC

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO IT'S OVER NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO /sobs in a corner and cries

But omg I'm so glad you involved the parents scene <3 And they had sex omg atzadfghjklsdhgjajk <333

And the ending is PERFECT!! I absolutely loved the last line!!! Even though I knew that he was going to confess at the game xD It's clichey and obvious but cliches exist for a reason :p It was fluffy and adorable and aghadjkdghj I love you too Wu Yi Fan and XingXing you're the best ever <333 ( ... )

miss_aztec57 March 9 2013, 22:11:37 UTC

/wipes away your tears ♥

YES I thought you would have liked that haha since you mentioned it before ^^ Yixing's parents were so lovely about it all really.

THANK YOU SO MUCH im glad you liked that line! I literally spent so long reading and re-reading that last line and deleting it and re-writing it because I was just so unsure about it but it seems like everyone loves it so, that makes me so pleased~ haha well considering the entire story was a bundle of cliches , I suppose that was nothing out of the ordinary ;)

aw yeah I was thinking about it but, I really wanted to end it on that exact basketball scene! besides, in the end it ultimately doesn't matter what they think anymore because thats the point, Wu Fan doesn't careoh really? omg wow asdfgjkl that makes me feel so special! im so glad that you liked it that much really, ahhh thats so wonderful ;; /flails at you. ♥ no thank you for always making me smile because your comments have been so lovely throughout this fic, really. there were people whose comments I would always ( ... )

ext_1584421 March 18 2013, 16:08:03 UTC

Yeah I understood that, Wu Fan doesn't care anymore what people think and that's exactly what makes their opinions irrelevant ^^ It's not important what people think because no one cares about their opinions anyway, they are just happy to be together and to be who they are ^^

Omg you're turning me into a squishy explosion of rainbows and marshmallows I'm so glad my comments make you happy >< And you are special! ^^ Thank you for introducing me to the world of fanfiction <3

There's really nothing to thank for :3 I was expecting every update eagerly. Thank you for being always on time and thank you for making this fic so epic! I luv you <33

miss_aztec57 March 8 2013, 09:57:53 UTC

spot for ruined_reverie who is always so very lovely to me (and is my little writing buddy) :3

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miss_aztec57 March 9 2013, 22:14:43 UTC

hehe ♥

THANK YOU SO MUCH OH MY GOSH NOW I FEEL LIKE I NEED TO RESPOND IN CAPSLOCK TOO BECAUSE I LITERALLY WANT TO SCREAM AT YOU AND TELL YOU HOW WONDERFUL YOU ARE. IM SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT THAT MUCH, I CAN'T EVEN EXPRESS HOW HAPPY THAT MAKES ME! THANK YOU ASDFGHJKL AND OMG ADDING IT TO YOUR FAVOURITES? /CRIES AT YOU AND SHOWERS YOU WITH HEARTS

but seriously, thank you so much lovely for reading it all and for all of your comments, they truly make my day that little bit brighter ♥ ♥ ♥