Comments | foe_of_reality: Secrets Worth Keeping [6/15]

miss_aztec57 in foe_of_reality

Secrets Worth Keeping [6/15]

Jan 04, 2013 20:31

secrets worth keeping [6/15]

Pairings: Kris/Lay, Xiumin/Luhan, one sided!Taoris, Kris/Chanyeol
Genre: High School!AU
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2,306
Summary: Wu Fan is the star player of the school’s basketball team and a known ladies man. But Yixing discovers that it’s not all quite what it seems.

prologue | one | two | three | four | five | six ( Read more... )

kris/tao, fic: secrets worth keeping, xiumin/luhan, chaptered, exo, kris/lay, fanfiction, genre: au

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miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 23:04:45 UTC

haha no I love it! It makes me happy when people say that, its perfect motivation ♥
thank you lovely! also I hope everything is going great with you (since you're not on twitter anymore) :3

allase January 4 2013, 14:31:47 UTC

oh yes ive been waiting for this <3 it sooo good i dont want it to end i want it to go forever ,,, but yet again i cant wait for the boys to get together~ kkk
ps first thing i thought after seeing the image below was your fic ^^

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miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 23:11:01 UTC

nawww xiuhan are so cute in those new photos! ♥ they look like such adorable boyfriends babies.
and I cant believe you thought of my fic after seeing that! asdfgjkl /squishes you~ well next chapter you get xiuhan (plus possibly the xiuhan side story ive been writing.
thanks lovely~ and don't freak out yet, we still have a few more chapters to go at least haha! ^^

emda January 4 2013, 18:48:05 UTC

I was thinking about this story today!!!!!!
Is so sweet how Yixing is falling slowly for Wufan!!!
Luhan is such a troll!!!!!
Looking forward to the next chapters!!

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 23:12:21 UTC

you were? omg ♥ I always just think people would read it and then forget about it haha
thank you lovely! (and yes, luhan is a troll lmao)

nara1214 January 4 2013, 20:57:34 UTC

Awwww~ shy Wufan is adorable and Xing noticing the little things about Wufan is too. Don't be scared Yixing, Wufan is there lol
XiuHan ❤❤❤ so cute ^___^

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 23:14:36 UTC

I know I just love shy wufan~ possibly because it usually leads to him being awkward and I love awkward wufan the most haha.
thanks lovely~ ♥

flameflowerful January 5 2013, 02:28:50 UTC

i like how your chapters just build up on each other because each one is better than the last imo

i'm rolling in kray feels for this chapter because the amazing thing is that it's so obvious that yixing is just totally starting to fall for wu fan. But what's even more awesome is that i could see the implications of wu fan liking yixing. That part during the study period where wu fan's voice sounded all tentative and he moved away - definitely a sign. i like how you showed that, and i especially loved the colorful way you described wu fan's beautiful eyes.

"I don't really think I could love someone I don't properly know," "
ZITAO (he needs a hug. he needs a BIG BIG BIG HUG BECAUSE HEARTBREAK IS IMMINENT). I like how he's very realistic about his infatuation.

miss_aztec57 January 5 2013, 04:09:22 UTC

wow thank you! im really glad you think so!

Yes! Its a little difficult to write Wu Fan's side without slipping into his perspective, so im so happy that it worked! Exactly, although it's not entirely obvious what Wu Fan is feeling, you can see that something has changed a little between them. thank you so much love ♥

Even though Zitao is really just a baby, I don't think he's that childish, and I really wanted to show that he can actually be mature about it all? even if half the time he just ogles kris haha xD

LETS JUST ALL GIVE ZITAO A BIG HUG~