Comments | foe_of_reality: Secrets Worth Keeping [6/15]

miss_aztec57 in foe_of_reality

Secrets Worth Keeping [6/15]

Jan 04, 2013 20:31

secrets worth keeping [6/15]

Pairings: Kris/Lay, Xiumin/Luhan, one sided!Taoris, Kris/Chanyeol
Genre: High School!AU
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 2,306
Summary: Wu Fan is the star player of the school’s basketball team and a known ladies man. But Yixing discovers that it’s not all quite what it seems.

prologue | one | two | three | four | five | six ( Read more... )

kris/tao, fic: secrets worth keeping, xiumin/luhan, chaptered, exo, kris/lay, fanfiction, genre: au

Comments 44

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 09:33:48 UTC

spot for k8tunnie ♥

k8tunnie January 5 2013, 03:05:22 UTC

Gosh this chapter is so cute, and it's really good tbh. Now I am wondering how much better the original was :'( what a pity! :'(

"revealing a thin blue strip of his underwear" <~ this reminded me about several photos of Yixing showing his blue underwear while dancing for Spectrum lmfao.

Haha yeah I am so right. It's Minseok who's been writing those letters for Luhan :') He's such a sweetie.

The tutor session is just as fluffy as always >3< and yay for Yixing starts to be aware of his feeling. AND HOLY FUCK LET ME LOVE YOU BECAUSE THE WAY YOU DESCRIBE WU FAN'S EYES IS PERFECT.

Chen is such a smooth mood maker. I can't love him enough <33333

LOL I've never thought that Yixing would be the one to cry while watching horror but I don't mind him jumping into Wu Fan's arms so I'M ALL FOR IT.

CAN TOMORROW BE NEXT FRIDAY PLEASE OTL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

miss_aztec57 January 5 2013, 04:16:43 UTC

thank you! im glad you think so~ aw the original wasn't too much different but there were some descriptions and lines that I really liked but I couldn't remember ;;

NGL THATS ACTUALLY WHAT I WAS THINKING OF

Minseok is just a cute little romantic at heart~

THANK YOU! well I think when you like someone, you start to become painfully aware of things you would never have even cared about before - and in this case, its the detail of Wu Fan's eyes that Yixing notices for the first time ♥

lmao I actually enjoy writing Chen so much. I probably haven't characterised him great but, idc because he is so much fun!

IM SORRY BUT I DONT CONTROL THE DAYS OF THE WEEK ;D

edenslullaby January 4 2013, 09:52:53 UTC

omg i need the next chapter now!

< too eager to see yixing hiding into wu fan's arms........,

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 22:42:18 UTC

hehe ♥

jaerotic January 4 2013, 09:57:27 UTC

i woke up this morning with a smile and i whispered. "it's friday." 8)
/rolls into place

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 22:43:27 UTC

omg ;; ♥ I love you haha

splickerflicker January 4 2013, 10:02:54 UTC

NOOO..NOOO..WHY AM I FINISHED...NOOO..NOOOO...ANOTHER WEEK...NOOOO NOOOO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
/self-combusts

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 22:45:43 UTC

DONT WORRY NEXT FRIDAY WILL COME SOONER THAN YOU THINK! ♥
Im thinking that when I finish typing out the whole story, I might post twice a week instead.
nooo don't self combust...or you won't be able to read the next chapter! haha but im glad you like it lovely!

baekie January 4 2013, 10:28:52 UTC

Okaaaaay!
Wufan; kill me already! He's damn cute here and Yixing... Boy just go get a room reserved already! XD
I love how this story goes; it's really A W E S O M E and I can't just feel with them!!! :D

Yixing... you're falling... I hope too deep... ^^

miss_aztec57 January 4 2013, 22:47:40 UTC

Thank you love! ♥
oh yes, he is definitely falling in deep ;)