And Baby Makes Three; PG-13

Dec 30, 2009 23:47

Title: And Baby Makes Three
Artist/Author: suspicious
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Rated a little high due to a certain Alchemist's wandering mind.
Word Count: 1,426
Disclaimer: I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist in the slightest.
Your prompt: Some future stuff. Like having baby, :)

He had never been more grateful for sleepless nights in his lifetime. )

exchange 1, char: winry rockbell, year_2009, participant: suspicious, char: edward elric

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dzioo December 31 2009, 07:53:28 UTC
Oh, please. If Mr. Hughes were around to see you… you and Roy, even… he would have a field day laughing at your sorry asses.”

“No, he wouldn’t!”

“Oh, and why is that?”

“He would be sharing his pictures, too.”
oh he so would XDDDDD

THAT
WAS
BRILLIANT XDDDDD

fantastic piece^^ very touching, soft and funny at times, yet very hopeful as well^^ truth be told, I too imagined Ed as being a similar parent^^

I liked that you divided the fic in sequences, how the baby came to them. all Ed's thoughts are very possible and close to his character I think^^

once again, it was an amazing piece, thank you for sharing it^^

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suspicious January 5 2010, 00:58:31 UTC
Thank you very much!

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evil_little_dog December 31 2009, 12:34:07 UTC
I really, really love this fic. It's so sweet and darling and...Ed (who is barely one and never the other but it works for this).

Favorite scene is the nursing scene - can see it in my head, all too clearly. *laugh*

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suspicious January 5 2010, 00:59:13 UTC
That was the scene I actually started off with in my mind and had to shape the rest of the story around it. ;)

Perfect icon for it, too.

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evil_little_dog January 5 2010, 03:17:09 UTC
Well, that one or mine. *laughs*

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suspicious January 5 2010, 03:18:34 UTC
I meant yours but both of ours are relevant!

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sindsyglolita December 31 2009, 18:42:30 UTC
KYAAAA!~ That was my prompt! X3 I'm Very VERY pleased of it!! <3 Great job!

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suspicious January 5 2010, 00:59:32 UTC
Oh, yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

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cornerofmadness January 1 2010, 06:30:59 UTC
aw this was sweet and I loved the bit about the pictures

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suspicious January 5 2010, 00:59:48 UTC
Thank you! :)

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ishte January 1 2010, 20:59:54 UTC
(I'll try putting this in the right place now:)

gah! This is sooo sweet. Teeth....aching....

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suspicious January 5 2010, 01:00:12 UTC
haha I'll take that as a compliment! ;)

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