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Aug 27, 2011 16:48

Title: The Better Woman
Author: zukpager305
Recipient: alia_aeterna
Rating: PG13 for some swearing
Characters/Pairings: Riza Hawkeye and Rebecca Catalina
Summary: Strangers are just friends waiting to happen.
Notes: Word Count- 2,457

( Rebecca Catalina’s first day at the East Academy was the stuff of legends, or so she thought wryly. )

author: zukpager305, character: vanessa, character: rebecca catalina, character: riza hawkeye, recipient: alia_aeterna, character: madame christmas, fic

Comments 3

likeadeuce August 28 2011, 17:17:22 UTC

These are really fun!

Over the weeks, Rebecca’s aim improved and Riza’s confidence grew.

Equivalent exchange! And I love Riza's "Let them have their hollow victory" line in the academy story. Sounds so much like her

The second one is cool, too -- interesting to get more detail on how Mustang's spy ring works!

r_kimono September 6 2011, 04:50:37 UTC

Rebecca's so fun. Her fire and Riza's quiet offset each other so well - and I love that Havoc apologizes, in the end. That the Vanessa and Riza fic follows the Rebecca and Riza one makes me wonder how Rebecca and Vanessa would get along (like a house on fire, I'd guess). And I love Roy and Riza's end conversation here too.

zippitgood September 7 2011, 23:00:41 UTC

I quite enjoyed seeing how Riza and Rebecca got to be such close friends during their Academy days. I'm not sure your Havoc meshes with my view of him but I enjoyed seeing what life was like at the Academy.

Interesting look at the workings of Madame Christmas' intelligence ring though Hawkeye might be a bit too visible for her excursion into it.