Prompt 241, Payday, "Now, and Likely Forever"

Oct 15, 2013 21:43


Title: Now, and Likely Forever
Series: Brotherhood
Word Count: 999
Rating: PG
Characters: Roy/Riza, mentions of Ed and Al
Summary: She’s grasping the thin paper, soft and imported from the royal courts of Xing, and it feels like her world is spinning out.
Warning: Angst x a billion; OOC-ness, potentially
A/N: Roy can see, and Team Mustang has been split ( Read more... )

blind challenge, prompt 241

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evil_little_dog October 20 2013, 15:23:34 UTC
I really enjoyed this story. The longing is quite evident in both of them.

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drummerdancer October 20 2013, 18:51:53 UTC
Very touching!

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bay115 October 20 2013, 19:40:17 UTC
Usually I'm not sure over the ban on fraternization law as it's too easy for Arakawa to do that if she wants. However, I like that Olivier will give it a trail period. Still a very sweet piece, though!

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evil_little_dog October 21 2013, 11:17:31 UTC
Re: The ban: Arakawa says in some interview (or something I read that was a direct translation) that the reason Roy and Riza aren't married is because of the military ban on fraternization, and Riza won't leave the military, because she has to protect Roy.

So, yeah, it is a thing.

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bay115 October 21 2013, 15:51:26 UTC
Oh wow, realized I forgot a word in that post, "lifting". Thought I put it there. So my original post was supposed to say "Usually I'm not sure over lifting the ban on fraternization law". What I meant is it's too easy for Arakawa to lift the ban. Can't edit that post now as you replied to it. Missing one word can change a whole sentence. >.>;

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evil_little_dog October 22 2013, 00:28:31 UTC
It really can. :D

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