Prompt 223: Salt in the Wound - A Son's Promise

[catw00man]

Title: A Son's Promise
Author: Catw00man
Series: PRE Brotherhood/Manga; From the Beginning: In Pieces
Word Count: 250
Rating: PG
Characters: Roy Mustang, Chris Mustang & and an OC
Summary: Reminders of the past can be found around every corner.
Author’s Note: Small word counts are such a killer. I’m just hope I got this scene to work

Comments

[sofipitch]

This is so, sad, and tragic, and and and.... I just... This came out really strong and I'm going to leave it at that.

[cornerofmadness]

The last passage with Roy staring at the funeral procession is very well done.

[zippitgood]

Poor precious thing.

[evil_little_dog]

Poor baby Roy.

[chobot_so_hot]

Aww- kind of haha beginning with a serious end. Very nice.