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Prompt 215 : Divine "Lost"

Apr 18, 2013 15:17

Title: Lost
Author: Catw00man
Series: PRE Brotherhood/Manga
Word Count: 250
Rating: PG
Characters: Roy Mustang
Summary: There’s no easy answer to find your way.
Author’s Note: I just wanted to say a huge THANK YOU for all the kind feed back I’ve received on these stories. It’s definitely keeping me motivated! :-D Hopefully I’ll get a chance now to catch up ( Read more... )

prompt 215, catw00man

Comments 19

evil_little_dog April 21 2013, 14:31:32 UTC

Oh, cool, a dowsing rod in use in FMA. :D

catw00man April 21 2013, 20:26:46 UTC

LOL To be honest it was the only thing I could think of and still keep going in this verse. ;-)

raceulfson April 21 2013, 18:17:35 UTC

Divining rods! Great take on the prompt. I also liked little Roy dismissing "drawing silly designs".

catw00man April 21 2013, 20:28:10 UTC

Thanks! And yeah, it just kinda hit me that I doubt out in the country like that that they might not think much about alchemy. Plus, irony really is fun. LOL Glad you liked it!

bay115 April 21 2013, 18:36:07 UTC

Still enjoying this series of yours a lot. You mentioned it fell flat to you and I think the reason is because perhaps you wanted to expanded some parts or you already established little Roy sad over this parents' death for a while. I would like to see more of Roy kinda moving pass that (understandable it'll take a while for him to get use to this) and your take on what happens next. This is still good, though!

catw00man April 21 2013, 20:37:45 UTC

Thank you! And you know I think you're probably right. I was trying to keep with this series and this was the only way I saw the prompt working, but yes it was a little repetitive for me as far as his emotions.

I'm ready for him to get moved on too. ;-) Poor thing. At this point I think I'm just following his lead. LOL So glad you're enjoying it!