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Prompt 202, Character Death, "Waves"

Jan 17, 2013 18:15

Title: Waves
Author: Sofipitch
Series: Brotherhood/Manga
Word Count: 331
Rating: PG
Characters: Havoc
Summary: It’s scary to die alone.
Warnings: just spoilers really

( “Damnit, we failed,” )

prompt 202, sofipitch

Comments 15

catw00man January 18 2013, 01:32:59 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH HAVOC!!!

Love. Just love. I can't think of anything else to say!

sofipitch January 18 2013, 21:54:19 UTC

Thank you!

sonjajade January 18 2013, 04:21:13 UTC

wow, this was awesome!!

sofipitch January 18 2013, 21:54:39 UTC

Thanks!

evil_little_dog January 18 2013, 04:48:34 UTC

Awww, poor Jean.

Great descriptions in this!

sofipitch January 18 2013, 21:55:01 UTC

Thank you!

evil_little_dog January 19 2013, 03:19:17 UTC

You're welcome!

sceptick January 18 2013, 05:51:44 UTC

Damn, I never even thought about how Havoc must have felt in those last few minutes :"( This is heart-wrenching as all get out. Lovely work!

sofipitch January 18 2013, 21:43:16 UTC

I got inspiration to write this when I didn't see Havoc in the manga when they were showing the main character's death.
Thank you!

bay115 January 19 2013, 21:11:56 UTC

Oh ouch. Like Havoc's thoughts there. Great work!

sofipitch January 21 2013, 21:40:44 UTC

Thank you!