Prompt 179, Brick, A Million Tales

Aug 05, 2012 10:29


Title: A Million Tales
Author: Sofipitch
Series: 2003 anime
Word Count: 250
Rating: G
Characters: OC, Winry
Summary: Grandma seems to keep a lot of secrets.
Warnings: Very vague spoiler for the ending of the first movie.

Grandma had always been very secretive about that album. )

prompt 179, sofipitch

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evil_little_dog August 5 2012, 15:45:45 UTC
Awww, poor Winry, and the secrets she has.

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sofipitch August 5 2012, 17:05:05 UTC
She has (a) grandchild(children) so she has to be happy. At least to some extent.

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evil_little_dog August 6 2012, 03:16:11 UTC
Yes.

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pedanticpigeon August 6 2012, 04:50:13 UTC
I loved the second-person perspective of this; you wrote it very well. This was sad, but I enjoyed it quite a lot.

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sofipitch August 6 2012, 20:27:38 UTC
Thanks! I was too lazy to come up with a name or description, and I like second person so, wala!

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ssadropout August 6 2012, 22:04:53 UTC
I like this a lot.

Even though the photo upset Winry, I hope that she has moved on and had a good life. I think that one can be basically happy but still wonder sadly about what might have been.

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sofipitch August 7 2012, 01:25:35 UTC
Thanks!

I do believe that she had a good life. Winry was never one to dwell too much one the past, but I do believe that it still haunts her, even at an old age.

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syolen August 6 2012, 23:51:01 UTC
Awww, poor Winry. Even though she moved on, that old ache will always be there...

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sofipitch August 7 2012, 01:27:33 UTC
I always thought she got the rough end of the deal, in both versions.

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syolen August 7 2012, 02:35:57 UTC
She definitely did. She got her happy ending in one of these, at least. She's probably the strongest in the Trio.

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sofipitch August 7 2012, 11:04:04 UTC
She deserved it. She is the strongest, she just wasn't allowed to help them.

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kagome_angel August 7 2012, 00:54:48 UTC
Old aches like that just don't let go of you completely. :( Poor Winry. You wrote this very well in second-person. :) I enjoyed the read!

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sofipitch August 7 2012, 01:29:52 UTC
Nope. Poor child...
Thank you!

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