Prompt 179: Brick - "Anniversary"

Aug 04, 2012 05:29

Title: Anniversary
Author: Starlit Purple
Series: manga/Brotherhood (Though could be an AU of either, really.)
Word count: 250
Rating: G
Characters: Ed, Roy
Summary: “It's okay to forget now, you know.”
Warnings: None
Author's Note: I had to shave a bit of it down to fit the word count, so I hope it doesn't feel too choppy. Thanks to tsukino_akume for looking ( Read more... )

lunaria_kitty, prompt 179

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bay115 August 4 2012, 17:00:20 UTC
Aw, I want to hug Ed. Like that Roy came to visit him on the anniversary of the house being burned down. Great work!

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lunaria_kitty August 7 2012, 01:45:39 UTC
Ed needs hugs! (Roy/Ed is my favorite, but I tend to stick to more of the canon side when writing. Otherwise there might have been hugs.)

Thanks! :)

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sofipitch August 4 2012, 19:21:40 UTC
I liked this!

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lunaria_kitty August 7 2012, 01:46:12 UTC
Thanks! :)

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pedanticpigeon August 5 2012, 07:21:22 UTC
This was nice.

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lunaria_kitty August 7 2012, 01:46:41 UTC
Thank you :)

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ssadropout August 6 2012, 21:58:51 UTC
Very nice. As much as Ed has been through, Roy is older and maybe :) a little wiser. It's pleasant when those two do not fight.

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lunaria_kitty August 7 2012, 01:53:22 UTC
Thank you! I like when they get along. The little bit of snark in this actually got cut, so I was worried it'd seem a bit ooc, since they were so amicable. But I'm glad it worked. :)

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syolen August 7 2012, 00:01:01 UTC
Aw, it's nice to see Ed and Roy not fighting, for once. I like the way you show that there's kind of a mutual understanding between them - they've both been through a lot, but it has only made them more determined to reach their goals.

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lunaria_kitty August 7 2012, 04:48:44 UTC
I figure after all they've been through and the few years since then, they'd have gained a mutual respect for one another. (And a bit more maturity.) There was a tiny bit of snark in this, but it was part of what got cut out, unfortunately. Thanks for your comment! :)

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