Prompt 166, "I Need to Let You Go", Adonis Burned

[gretchen8642]

Title: Adonis Burned
Author: gretchen8642
Series: manga post series
Word Count: 1934 (O_O)
Rating: R
Characters: Roy, Riza, OC
Summary: it's not Maes, but... holy hell.
Note: yo, back from the grave. finals and a trip to iceland and stuff happened.
as a side note, I would looooove to see a bit of this shooped and sonjajade you are so perfect for it i don

Comments

[47thlight]

Omg, that broke my heart to pieces. I got gripped so tightly by it and I really, really appreciate the descriptive text you gave us. That was masterful!

I'm gonna go cry now.

[lunaria_kitty]

Very moving piece of work! Oh Roy my heart is aching for you. :( To be hit with such a surprise after all those years, and all the conflicting emotions that go with it...poor thing. :( I hope he got lots of hugs from Riza and Lily afterward. And a part of me hopes he changes his mind about Artalla and lets him help to guard Lily.

[evil_little_dog]

Now I want to know more about James.

[cornerofmadness]

this is so very different and at the same time wonderful. I never thought about any of them having half-breed sons/daughters from the war but of course it makes perfect sense. I love this future and would like to see more of it.