Prompt 155 - Grope: "In the Margin V"

Feb 17, 2012 21:30

Title: In the Margin V

Author: SammyQuill

Series: Manga

Word Count: 243

Characters: Roy, Riza, Master Hawkeye

Summary: More excerpts from Roy’s alchemy notebooks

AN: Is the Big Bang deadline scaring anyone as much as it is me?

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vince_moon February 17 2012, 15:34:53 UTC
Alchemy notes, great idea. I really liked ths.

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missyquill February 18 2012, 00:35:25 UTC
Thank you. :) This is the fifth installment of Roy's notes. If you'd like to read 1 through 4, feel free to check them out here: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7093387/1/In_The_Margin

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vince_moon February 18 2012, 01:31:48 UTC
Oh, thank you.

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bay115 February 17 2012, 16:40:19 UTC
Yes Roy, better be cautious whenever you're alone with Riza. :P Still enjoying these series of notes very much.

Over the Big Bang deadline, yup it's scaring me. Already have my story more or less done, it's the editing that's killing me. D: I may or may not bother you about my own Big Bang :x

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missyquill February 18 2012, 00:41:52 UTC
Firstly, I'm sorry, I meant to email you but hotmail was acting up. :( *needs to look into gmail* Anyway, very sorry for the delay but I promise I'll get chapter four to you by today - meaning in the next twelve hours. My own Big Bang hasn't even seen ten K yet so my beta and I thought it sufficient to go into panic mode. XD

Now, thanks for the comment and liking these series. I love the thought of Msster Hawkeye shooting flames of hell to warn Roy to stay away from Riza. XDDD

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bay115 February 18 2012, 02:16:38 UTC
Yeahhhhhh hotmail sucks sometimes. >.>; Might be best to use gmail. And okay, looking forward to hearing from you!

Hahaha I love that thought too. :P

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ssadropout February 17 2012, 23:19:10 UTC
How awesomely cool of Master Hawkeye! I love this series of yours. Roy is just so clueless about nearly everything in it. I can see Hawkeye (Riza, that is) finding this stuff years later. "..Quite fetching.." ought to make her crack a smile.

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missyquill February 18 2012, 00:48:31 UTC
I know right! I think I'm among the few in the fandom who don't think of Master Hawkeye as the root of all evil. I believe he loved Riza and even Roy. He would have needed to keep in practice even in a small town/large village they lived at. And you're tempting me to write a version where Riza finds these. XD

"Sir, fetching, really?"

"What can I say, Lt, your presence always left me at a loss for words."

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ssadropout February 18 2012, 01:31:52 UTC
I think of Master Hawkeye as damaged (possibly from the loss of his wife) clueless as to raising a girl, obsessed with flame alchemy, and a little crazy (um, ALCHEMIST!). I do think that he means well, loves Riza (but the obsession and the crazy come in to play in how he treats her), and does care about Roy. (He does ask Roy to take care of Riza or WTTE.)

Oh, you DO have to write a fic or two or three about Riza discovering Roy's notes!!! You already have that great nugget above to build around!

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evil_little_dog February 24 2012, 19:55:22 UTC
*snicker* to the story.

I am awaiting edits for my final five chapters of my Big Bang impatiently so I can put that baby to bed.

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sexkitten426 February 25 2012, 10:16:49 UTC
Heh, 'completely coincidental'. Care to test that theory, Roy? Methinks you shall get burned.

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