Prompt 140, giving in/giving up, "The Love You Need"

[halighfataliter]

Title:The Love You Need
Author: Halighfataliter
Word Count: 480
Rating: G
Characters: Gracia Hughes, Elysia Hughes
Author's Note: I'm not quite happy with this but I can't put my finger on what is off. If you have an idea... Otherwise, this was inspired by Florence and The Machine's beautiful song, "You've got the love".

Summary: "But she’s got the love

Comments

[likeadeuce]

This is beautifully written, I love the insight into Gracia. Well done.

[halighfataliter]

Thanks :) I immediately thought of her when I read the prompt but I hesitated for while. Apart from her kindness and prowess in the kitchen, we know so little about her...

[cornerofmadness]

how very bittersweet. I loved the description in this

[halighfataliter]

Thank you :)
I think those weekly (or almost) prompts are doing me a world of good (though there are still things to improve)

[cornerofmadness]

I find prompts very helpful to my writing

[bay115]

Aw over Gracia, love your take on her. Great work!

[halighfataliter]

Thanks, glad you liked my little Gracia-piece :)

[r_kimono]

This is extremely sad and gorgeously written. Poor Gracia.

[halighfataliter]

Thank you :)