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Prompt #135 Romance "After"

Oct 06, 2011 20:51

Title: After
Author:   inugrlrayn
Word Count: 240
Rating: PG
Characters: Roy/Ed
Summary: Ed contemplates an after he never expected to live to see.
Warnings: none really

( He’d never really stopped to consider the after. )

inugrlrayn, prompt 135

Comments 24

havemy_heart October 7 2011, 03:58:06 UTC

♥ Gives me the warm fuzzies :)

inugrlrayn October 9 2011, 00:25:30 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

catw00man October 7 2011, 03:58:24 UTC

*MELTS*

Love, love, love this. I love the pacing, the beautiful descriptions and the emotion that are just so touching. I can so imagine Ed not being able to look past his goals and I absolutely adore where you let him end up.

Gorgeous! :-D

inugrlrayn October 9 2011, 00:26:37 UTC

Thank you very much! Ed gets such tunnel vision about all the things he feels responsible for, I figured he deserved a happy ending.

zippitgood October 7 2011, 04:07:11 UTC

This is so sweet and so utterly Ed. He would be blind to everything aside from his goals and him and Mustang getting together would so be a surprise for him. I love the sweet moment at the end that really shows their intimacy and everything else about their relationship in such a simple touch.

inugrlrayn October 9 2011, 00:27:39 UTC

I always struggle with small word counts and get all paranoid that I'm not getting my point across. I'm so glad that the feeling came through <33

adoxerella October 7 2011, 12:20:27 UTC

This was lovely. Thanks for sharing this with us.

inugrlrayn October 9 2011, 00:28:04 UTC

Thank you for reading it <3

halighfataliter October 7 2011, 14:42:46 UTC

That was just... *sigh*... perfect...

inugrlrayn October 9 2011, 00:28:34 UTC

Thanks :) I'm glad you liked it