Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 132, Rebound, "The Recuperative State"

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Prompt 132, Rebound, "The Recuperative State"

Sep 15, 2011 20:24

Title: The Recuperative State
Author: Zippit
Characters: Roy Mustang/Edward Elric
Rating: PG-13 (for Ed's mouth)
Warnings: N/A
Word Count: 480
Series: Manga/Brotherhood
Beta: Thanks to catw00man. All other errors are mine.
Author's Notes: I do adore these two and how sweet they can be.

Summary: Roy spends far too much time sitting beside hospital beds.

( The Recuperative State )

zippitgood, prompt 132

Comments 10

lepharus September 17 2011, 03:12:50 UTC

Aww, I love a cute ending! I also think you did the Roy POV thing really well.

zippitgood September 18 2011, 23:22:18 UTC

Thanks!

bay115 September 18 2011, 17:29:40 UTC

This is very sweet. Indeed, some things never change, haha. Great work!

zippitgood September 18 2011, 23:22:45 UTC

Of course not, this is Ed. ;)

catw00man September 18 2011, 18:46:41 UTC

Guh, I absolutely adore them. Granted I always adore them, but this I adore more than others. LOL ;-)

So glad you did this one!!! He really is a love sick bastard, isn't he? So. Damn. Sweet!

zippitgood September 18 2011, 23:27:05 UTC

They are adorable even though they try not to be. *lol* And yes, the Roy is. Of course he is.

cornerofmadness September 18 2011, 20:37:02 UTC

Ah, how nice it is to have Ed awake and spewing insults at him. I fully believe they love insulting and being insulted by each other. well done

zippitgood September 18 2011, 23:27:33 UTC

I do too. They enjoy it far too much for it to ever stop.

evil_little_dog September 18 2011, 23:17:26 UTC

Love Ed's comment about Roy not needing to sit there like a lovesick bastard.

zippitgood September 18 2011, 23:28:21 UTC

It is so utterly Ed. Thanks for reading.