Comments | fma_fic_contest: Prompt 126, Heart, "A Part of Me"

gretchen8642 in fma_fic_contest

Prompt 126, Heart, "A Part of Me"

Aug 02, 2011 22:45

Title: A Part of Me ( Read more... )

Comments 13

ladynorbert August 2 2011, 21:50:04 UTC

I like how Riza more or less knows and she's totally calm about it. "Dinner's almost ready" indeed.

Not my ship, but I like it the way you present it. :)

gretchen8642 August 5 2011, 21:03:51 UTC

d'aw thanks for reading it even though it is not your ship <33333

sonjajade August 2 2011, 21:59:09 UTC

*sniff* I got a little teary eyed there at the end. Well done.

gretchen8642 August 5 2011, 21:06:26 UTC

d'aw! thanks <3

bay115 August 3 2011, 00:27:38 UTC

Those letters are heartbreaking to read. :< Poor Roy and Maes. I too though like how Riza is totally fine about this. I actually think she's totally supportive of those two. Great work!

gretchen8642 August 5 2011, 21:06:53 UTC

thanks so much, she's so supportive yeah XD <33 glad you liked.

seaweed_fma August 3 2011, 05:11:03 UTC

I would love to see this expanded, watch their whole lives unfold like this. It is an awesome idea done with a superb hand. Well done!

gretchen8642 August 5 2011, 21:07:25 UTC

I may expand a little for big bang XD
thanks so much <3333

toulonwanderer August 5 2011, 18:50:03 UTC

Hughes's letters are very energetic, they bring a smile. Mustang's reply is heartfelt and sincere. Good job! ^^

gretchen8642 August 5 2011, 21:07:47 UTC

d;aw thanks so much, so glad you enjoyed <3