Prompt 355- Thief: "Pants on Fire"

[sonjajade]

Title: Pants on Fire
Author: Sonja Jade
Series: Brotherhood
Word Count: 789
Rating: G
Characters: Ed, Al, Winry, Trisha
Summary: Ed takes something that belongs to Winry and it takes her tattling on him to get it back.
Warnings: no beta, no time!
Author’s Notes: Inspired by my own childhood, and I am not happy with this for some reason but I’m too

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

Ed, you really are a jerk. :D

Love your descriptions in this.

[sonjajade]

I reread this now that I've had some sleep and it's actually not as bad as I thought it was. Glad you liked it too!

[evil_little_dog]

It's funny how that happens sometimes. :D

[capnhoozits]

Ed would probably look back on this as an adult and really squirm (one would hope). A well done little slice of life.

[sonjajade]

I'd like to think that he secretly adds to it once he returns home, maybe getting Al to make the jar a little bigger over time so she doesn't notice.

[cornerofmadness]

Oh Ed, Winry might be right about you being a jerk.

[raceulfson]

I really like how realistic this feels. Ed has no time for dead people or sentiment, he has to look after his little brother and Win should understand that. Poor Trisha.

[bay115]

I apologize for not replying sooner. Read this sometime last week, but then I wasn't feel well, bleh.

I like this piece a lot. Ed has good intentions, but yeah getting something not yours totally not good idea, lol. Great work!