HOUSE M.D. FIC: Regarding House, 4/7

[flywoman]

Chapter 4: Coming Together
“Come at once if convenient - if inconvenient come all the same.”

“Wilson,” I said the following night after clearing away the dinner dishes, “There was something else in my medical file that I needed to ask you about.”

“Okay,” Wilson said with a slight frown, sitting forward on the sofa.

“In May of 2008

Comments

[alternatealto]

Why can't the show's writers give us this kind of perfectly easy and natural relationship between the two of them?

And why do I have the feeling that there is something more to Cuddy's accident than Wilson is letting on?

[flywoman]

Why can't the show's writers give us this kind of perfectly easy and natural relationship between the two of them?
Or between any two of them?

And why do I have the feeling that there is something more to Cuddy's accident than Wilson is letting on?
Um... maybe because Wilson immediately and not-so-subtly decided to distract House with a blowjob? ;)

[petitecuriosity]

"Twenty-fucking-years." I think this says it all

[flywoman]

I love how they finally came together; the incredible fear.

There are so many different ways to write first-time scenes, aren't there? I think the most realistic ones have to grapple with the fact that it has taken them so many years to make the attempt, which means there must have been a high barrier in place, and fear seemed like the most logical one to me.

I especially liked Foreman and Chase's reactions.

Hee, me too! This scene started as the following fragment:

Masters paused mid-sentence and frowned, her eyes fixed just below my jawline. “Dr. House, is that a- oww!” She turned and glared at Foreman, whose face was set in a determinedly bland expression.

“Sorry,” he said. “Foot slipped.”

It took two more months for me to figure out what to do with it.

I also wonder if alternatealto is correct and that maybe he had something to do with the accident?

It's really enjoyable for me to watch my readers try to solve the mystery before House does!

I wish this would happen on the show.I think this sums up perfectly what fanfic

[sara_tsuzuki]

I was reading this since chapter 1. It very interesting, well worked, and now, this part was SUPER hot. I love it!

[flywoman]

I've been waiting for someone to tell me that this chapter was super hot ;). Thanks for your comments!