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Fic: Still Breathing

Oct 31, 2011 10:26

Title: Still Breathing
Author: Del Rion (delrion.mail (at) gmail.com)
Fandom: Heroes
Era: Season 3 (episode 12/13)
Genre: Drama
Rating: K / FRC / G
Characters: Claire Bennet, Peter Petrelli (, Nathan Petrelli)
Summary: Peter reflects on his life after Nathan’s gone.
Complete.
Written for: Heroes_Contest’s (heroes-contest) Drabble Challenge 31: Breath.
Warnings: ( Read more... )

fanfic, rating: g, author: del_rion

Comments 2

no_ones_sleep October 31 2011, 10:54:52 UTC

I really liked it. Though it hurts to read. Or maybe because it hurts. To think that Peter never said goodbye to the real Nathan makes me want to cry all over. Then there's Claire with her warmth, and Peter just won't let himself have this consolation... And you said it wasn't as emotinally touching as you hoped it would be?!

del_rion October 31 2011, 11:00:59 UTC

I really wanted to do something... extraordinary with this one, to make it mean more. But I guess for someone who didn't create the words (readers) it is a very different matter than it is to me. I wish there was a filter, to "view as reader" sort of thing.

Glad you liked this one (even though it hurt, although it was meant to sting a little ;)