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(01/01) Wait for Me

Jan 27, 2013 03:36

TITLE: Wait for Me (01/01)
AUTHOR: aishizuki@LJ
PAIRING: Ohno Satoshi x Sakurai Shoko (Yama)
RATING: G
GENRE: Slice of Life/Romance
TYPE: Oneshot
SUMMARY: Alternate Universe. After a short and sweet call from the person closest to her heart, Shoko thinks her New Year's Eve isn't so bad after all.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Obligatory gift!fic for Sho's 31st ( Read more... )

t: genderbent, g: romance, r: g, c: sakurai sho, t: oneshot, g: slice of life, c: ohno satoshi, p: ohno x sakurai

Comments 10

kk4food January 27 2013, 07:36:23 UTC

Shoko fic, yay <3
Long distance relationship is hard,
Satoshi better go home soon,
before someone steals your Shoko away XD
Thanks for sharing^^

aishizuki February 4 2013, 06:48:49 UTC

As usual, my idol (when it comes to fics? haha) is the first to comment again~ <3 Thanks for taking the time to read and comment :DDD

Hahahaha, I could think of numerous plot twists to change it into a tragedy/angst but no. I chose to keep it short and sweet XD

Thanks again ♥

asaphira_sachi January 27 2013, 09:18:08 UTC

Awwww ♥ That's so sweet. I can imagine Shoko being diligent while secretly pining for Satoshi's affections, but somewhere deep inside knowing the feelings are mutual. It's that unspoken understanding that's really them. :3

aishizuki February 4 2013, 06:51:28 UTC

YES! That's the kind of feeling/mood I wanted to convey. YES SO UM YOU GOT IT SO I WROTE IT PROPERLY?

hihihi I MISS YOU WOMAN TALK TO ME MORE on facebook ♥

junnosuket January 27 2013, 16:41:42 UTC

Owwwwwwww........*melts*
A bitter yet extremely ROMANTIC fic.
I can almost visualized in my mind the ever hardworking Shoko giving all she has for work but sitting inside her living room by the window feeling lonely. XD

But Satoshi is coming back, finally.
And the presence of him being in the same country, breathing the same air eases out all Shoko's loneliness.

So Romantic!!! I love this fic!
Thank u very much for writing!!!!!! *hugs*

aishizuki February 4 2013, 06:52:27 UTC

I didn't want to make it all too romantic and overbearing, but seeing your reactions make me think I took the right path in writing it.

Thanks so much for reading it too ♥♥

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aishizuki February 4 2013, 06:53:12 UTC

Forever meant to be. XD ♥

Thanks for reading and commenting ♥

jaricchi February 4 2013, 06:36:20 UTC

your style changed again. But it's absolutely lovely dear. ; v ; ~♥

aishizuki February 4 2013, 06:45:20 UTC

How did it change? o 3o But thank youuuuuu. :D Wrote that while being super inspired haha lol

jaricchi February 5 2013, 09:31:53 UTC

your style constantly changes haha. xD Don't you only ever write when super inspired? xD I on the other hand always write whether inspired or not. haha

Again, lovely.