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jaricchi in flyingf1sh

(01/01) Perseverance

Jan 08, 2013 11:52

TITLE: Perseverance
AUTHOR: jaricchi
PAIRING: Sakumiya; slight Yama
RATING: PG
WORD COUNT:
GENRE: Drama
TYPE: Drabble
SUMMARY: He often wonders why he stayed that long. Why he persevered so long? When in the end, it wasn't up to him anyway.

( What the hell was his perseverance for? )

r: pg, g: drama, c: ohno satoshi, p: sakurai x ninomiya, p: ohno x sakurai, t: drabble, c: sakurai sho

Comments 10

devil29bich January 10 2013, 03:13:28 UTC

This requires more a sequel if you please. Too many questions unanswered.

jaricchi January 11 2013, 08:29:18 UTC

I'll try. haha

Thanks for reading! :)

sky_fish7 February 7 2013, 11:55:39 UTC

Omg... Since I'm currently in an relationship which maybe is almost done... This Hits me even more... It's well written and all but Don't be mad at me if I say that I need a little more sakumiyafluff now as compensation lol. Thanks for sharing.

jaricchi February 7 2013, 14:53:29 UTC

I'm glad that my fics are giving such reactions. I'm really sorry that I'm having you relive a bad experience. :( And no, absolutely not mad or offended. haha It's super angst, it anything else I'm flattered. ^^~♥

Thanks for reading!

yoeome sky_fish7 February 7 2013, 15:32:03 UTC

Yo're welcome. I really enjoy reading all kind of fanfictions with my favorite pairing so of course I can't scip angsty ones even if they often make me cry or something. This One gives me a lot to think. How could it come that far? Isn't it unfair how they treateach other? Couln't they have done something to keep the relationship from braking earlier and stufdf. It hurts because These are all questions that I often ask myself lately. I'm in the Last try of fixing what is already broken and somehow I can't really tell if I'm more in Nino's position or in Sho's regarding to your story. Im sorry for bubbling that much, please just forget it. But I just wanted to say even if the story is short there is so much more between the layers and I think you really catched a realistic (even if sad and horrible) situation of love there.

Re: yoeome jaricchi February 7 2013, 17:20:51 UTC

:( I'm so sorry you have to go through that. One thing I've learned in reality is that the harder you fight for something, the harder it is for it be fixed. The best option left is to simply let go. Which I've learned might be the hardest option.

I really do appreciate how well you responded to this story. I like to keep things Angst because it captures reality much to well. Happy endings are possible in reality, but often times they get too cliche. Too mainstream if you get what I mean.

I do hope that you manage out well in the future, with whatever you're going through. Again, thank you for reading. :) If you need a friend, I'm here.

nezu_ri February 21 2013, 15:48:59 UTC

sho... T_T nino... T___T
thanks for sharing...

jaricchi February 21 2013, 15:57:10 UTC

Thanks for reading. ^^

denyclamp November 5 2014, 20:40:09 UTC

AUCH!! Why?? God i wanna kill nino, i loved Sho words, i think those were the only words you can use "fuck you" xD my feelings god! T-T

jaricchi December 15 2014, 09:07:17 UTC

TT ^ TT I know~~~ Thank you so much for reading~