Rat in a Trap

[flying_monkees]

Title: Rat in a Trap
Author:
Characters: Mylar
Rating: PG
Warnings: Angst
Word Count:  504
Disclaimer: Heroes does not belong to me no matter how much I wish it did.
Summary: Sylar is caught and being experimented on
Table/Prompt:  This was written for mission_insane's AU/What if...? and piping_hot's Sketchy Mylar Challange Trapped
A/N:  I don't normally write angst but this

Comments

[neshel]

Have I told you how awesome it is that you've been writing all this Mylar lately? Very awesome. ^_^

[flying_monkees]

Thank you, lol, tho you can partially blame piping and her table for all the mylary goodness. I may just have to keep it up after Christmas too.

I'm really glad you've been enjoying yourself. :D Thanks for reading.

[levitatethis]

This is so heartbreaking and yet hopeful all at once.

You do a really great job of getting across the state of physical and inner turmoil that Sylar is going in. Stuck in this endless cycle of Hell and clinging to the one thing that makes it possible to keep going...but even that is slipping away.

I really like that even when Mohinder shows up Sylar is skeptical and disbelieving...refusing to let himself fall for such a cruel trick.

It's a very touching scene at the end with Mohinder embracing Sylar and letting him release all those hurts, all that pain...almost literally trying to shoulder it from him.

[flying_monkees]

*blushes* Thank you for the awesome comment!

I'm glad you feel that I got the hopelessness that Sylar feels so well, I wasn't sure if it came across like I'd hoped. I wanted to show that he was beyond despair and slipping into giving up.

After having Mo being his grip on his sanity and it starting to slip away, it would be hard for him to believe that Mo was actually there. It'd feel like a dream or a new test by his captors and he wouldn't want to fall for it.

The last part was actually the hardest to write. lol I wanted to show Sylar breaking down and Mo offering him what comfort he could and being kind of lost on how to handle Sylar being broken.

I'm so very glad you liked this so much. :D That just makes my day.

[kirara3345]

Awww....this was really great. I was deeply moved.
Heart-wrenching, but beautiful piece of art.
I absolutely loved this, thanks so much for sharing.

[flying_monkees]

Thank you, I'm glad you found it moving. I hoped I'd gotten the emotions across.

Thank you for reading. :D

[brandinsbabe]

aw man i have such a soft spot for fics where sylar is held captive and mohinder comes to rescue him. i loved the visual this created. nice!

[flying_monkees]

I know. I have a thing for fics where Sylar gets hurt and somone comes to rescue him too. :D Thank you, I'm glad you liked the fic. It makes me happy when I'm able to get things right and peeps like it.

Glad you enjoyed.

[flying_monkees]

I know, I want to cuddle him to, he so needs love and hugs. And only Mohinder could be the one to rescue him.

Glad you liked it dear. :D