Comments | flying_embers: [Fic] Bleach/ShuuKira

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[Fic] Bleach/ShuuKira

Apr 24, 2009 08:17

Title: A Journey of One Thousand Miles Began with One Step
Author: flying_embers
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Hisagi Shuuhei, Kira Izuru (friendship-wise at this point)
Word Count: 1143
Disclaimer: Bleach and these crazy characters belong to the master, Kubo Tite. And I’m pretty sure the title is owned by someone too, but I can’t remember who right now.
( Shuuhei cleaved tables and Kira lurked in the dark. )

pairing: shuuhei x kira, fandom: bleach

Comments 10

kwansan April 24 2009, 04:21:45 UTC

Wonderful fic! The personalities of Shuuhei and Izuru were captured perfectly. The gentle humbleness of Izuru balanced with the rash yet sensitive Shuuhei. If only Shuuhei didn't feel a need to be so... manly XD

Great job again! ^_^

flying_embers April 24 2009, 18:40:24 UTC

Thank you! Shuuhei likes to be manly XD

ceestar April 24 2009, 12:50:18 UTC

Uwah that was so good!
I love the way you captured the characters, they were just so... well in character, they were magnificent. From their patterns of speech to the their attitudes, it was all so well written.

This was such a nice read, one of my favourite things about these two is that they can be there for each other. Because they understand each other.

flying_embers April 24 2009, 18:46:23 UTC

Eeeee, thank you! Your comment gives me confidence to write more for this pairing <3

winteraconite April 25 2009, 14:16:53 UTC

I like how wary Shuuhei is of Kira in the latter part; so hesitant to accept his help. It goes very nicely with his character.

I like your characterizations of the both of them and how you made them act in this situation. Not a lot of people make Shuuhei lose control and need someone. It's usually the other way around, and you pulled it off wonderfully!

Great work!!!!!

flying_embers April 25 2009, 22:41:42 UTC

OMG thank you! I'm very happy to receive such comment from a writer like you!

winteraconite April 26 2009, 05:33:06 UTC

Fia, what're you talking about?! You are in a lot of ways better than I am, with your choice of words, your prose, etc!

NOW YOU MUST WRITE MORE SHUUKIRA OR ANTHA WILL STALK YOU IN YOUR DREAMS!!!!!!!!!

flying_embers April 27 2009, 20:19:29 UTC

What? Oh, please don't say that. Why don't we say we're both good and awesome :D

.... *TERRIFIED NOW*

sharl May 12 2009, 12:57:57 UTC

This is a very good fic, especially how you expressed these characters. Shuuhei was just being...well, Shuuhei. And it's adorable how Kira hesitantly offered his help to Shuuhei. ^^

Thank you so much for making this fic, this really made my day!! LOL

Long live manly Shuuhei!~wave a banner~

flying_embers May 12 2009, 21:22:29 UTC

Thank you for your comment! Manly Shuuhei is love <3