A Hard Day's Night [Tommy/Kevin]

[flyicarus]

Title: A Hard Day’s Night
Author: myherodrowning
Rating: T
fic_variations Prompt/Claim: Tommy Donnelly/Kevin Donnelly (#1)
Spoilers: Takes place after 1.01, “The Pilot.”
Warnings: Implied incest and mild language.
Author's Notes: Jesus, I love The Black Donnellys. It’s so shiny and brand new. Part of my If Tomorrow Never Comes series.

Comments

[lucentliz]

Wow. I loved Kevin's POV ...

At nineteen, he really did love to eat. Eat, and have sex. The two together didn’t exactly make a good combination, unless he was eating-
That was funny. And it sort of fit with the mood and the dark humor of the show...

I'm really not making any sense. I loved it. There.

[myherodrowning]

I like writing from Kevin's POV. He's just this kid who, in my opinion, was sort of lost in the shuffle; Sean was the baby, Tommy had the most promise, and Jimmy was the oldest and probably got into a lot of shit. So Kevin has this gambling problem, and he likes taking a chance on things because it gives him this rush. As well as the fact that everything can change in a split second, from up to down and everything in between. And much is that like his life? So much.

I'm glad you liked it! \o/

I liked this story!

[k4writer02]

You kept me there in the moment with Kevin as he makes the choice to follow Tommy. His realization that Tommy didn't stop the arrest and that that wasn't a bad thing? It was so well-paced, as he considers the past and the present.

I like his resolution to make Tommy better--since Tommy is the one cleaning up after everyone else, it's nice to see someone trying to clean up after him.

[joker_smoker]

This fic is great,it captures that moment that made me really interested in Kevin. Hope to see more.

Love this. "Mirror, mirror, who’s the dumbest of them all? Who the fuck would even say something that was so loaded, that even hinted at what Kevin meant? "

hehe.