Fic: Lost Boys - 'Dust to Dust' - David/Michael - PG

[flurblewig]

Title: Dust to Dust
Fandom: Lost Boys
Pairing: David/Michael
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1,056
Notes/Warnings: Unbeta'd. All comments, nitpicks & crit weclome
Disclaimer: Not mine. No profit, no foul.
Summary: The house is wrecked but they're all alive and the bad guys have been defeated. It's a fairytale ending. Isn't it?

Written for smallfandomfest 08: Michael

Comments

[jooles34]

Oh I really like this. I like the way you have captured the atmosphere after that final fight; the way the others would be celebrating but that Michael would actually be feeling loss and grieving in many respects. It's a great way of looking at it.

I think you've captured Michael well and the differences between the way David and Star talk, touch and relate to him is just brilliant; nice little touches.

If you write a follow on from this I would really like to read it.

[flurblewig]

Squee, thank you! It always seemed to me that Michael had such a greater connection with David than Star, and for him the ending of the film is a pyrrhic victory at best.

And since I firmly believe David survived somehow, there could well be more to tell. You never know!

Thanks so much for reading! :-)

Dust to Dust

[taibhrigh]

I really like what you did with my prompt! You did a great job with the aftermath of that final fight and Micheal's feelings/thoughts.

Re: Dust to Dust

[flurblewig]

Whee, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked! *bounces*

[tarlanx]

So sad that he realizes his loss too late.

[flurblewig]

Isn't it! I always think the film has a tragic ending, not a happy one :-)

Thanks for reading!

[havemy_heart]

This is perfect for how Michael would be feeling in the aftermath. Despite not having been a vampire for long, he had a connection with David that the others, not even Star, could understand.

[flurblewig]

Yes, exactly! I do think David loved his boys in his own way, but Michael was the one he'd been waiting for.

Thanks so much for reading!

Peya Luna

[anonymous]

Nice! i can all but see david hovering in the shadows, reading his thoughts and thinking. soon...and i like that michael rejects star for she doesn´t deserve a happy ending - she lied the whole time. i mean, seriously, if michael was supposed to be her first kill as she´d claimed, why would they give him the wine/blood? manipulative bitch...

Re: Peya Luna

[flurblewig]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked :-)