Opening My Eyes

[flugelmaphone9]

When i look at you,

and you look at me,

the world seems to stand still,

In your eyes,

I see the reflection,

of the world around us,

and it's like

all this time, I've been blind,

and I've just now learned,

to open my eyes.

All the colors of the world,

are visible and vibrant,

but once we are forced apart,

the world seems to die,

and everything turns

Comments

[anonymous]

That is so incredibly good I don't even know what to say...It made me smile when I read it in Biology (then everyone gave me a weird look)...lol...You have a natural talent to write. Maybe someday you can find a way to use it. Or maybe you can just write enough for me to read...lol. Well I better go. I really enjoyed the poem! lol. Love yas! Buh Bai!

*Tabi