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flufshepherd

Sour Revenge 26

Jan 12, 2006 19:09

Title: Sour Revenge, Part 26
Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: Fanfiction equivalent of NC-17
Feedback: If you like it, tell me. If you don't? Whatever. Tell me anyway.
Concrit: Very welcome in comments.
Disclaimer: Not mine.

Summary: Whole series written for willowschild who asked for "A varient on what happened to Xander when he cast the love spell. Only ( Read more... )

sour revenge, s/x, slash, btvs

Comments 22

darkhavens January 13 2006, 01:08:28 UTC

Xander squeaked? Hee! I can just imagine the look on Giles' face.

*knocks their heads together* Stoopid boys. :D

flufshepherd January 13 2006, 01:59:38 UTC

Yep! In my head Xander squeaks. It's 'cause, under that cool exterior, he's just a nervous little mouse. =-D

Thanks! ^_^

kitty_poker1 January 13 2006, 01:32:59 UTC

Yay! Love this. Giles decking the appalling Mr Harris, Xander worrying that he was fat and smelly and finally, finally admitting that he has feelings for Spike. *sigh*

"I do have plans to be a particularly scary bastard scheduled in half an hour. I should go get ready for it."

Snarky Spike. Mmm. My favourite.

flufshepherd January 13 2006, 02:04:10 UTC

Thank you! Xander's dad just was *begging* to be punched. Don't you think?

Whee! Quotage! *bounce* I'm so happy you liked it. X-D Thanks for being the lovely beta that you are. *smooch*

piratepurple January 13 2006, 01:40:23 UTC

*squee!* You wrote more of this! Yay!

flufshepherd January 13 2006, 02:08:05 UTC

I did! Isn't it such a nice change from not writing anything since...

*slaps head* October?!? What have I been *doing*?? Yeesh! Sorry for the wait.

vampchronicler January 13 2006, 07:03:33 UTC

Yes, more of this! *does a happy dance*

And I've just got to say, I loved these lines:

"One could say Sci Fi is my passion. It doesn't necessarily mean that I want to buy it roses and chocolates."

and

Because, I've got to say, you're much cuter when you keep your insides inside."

flufshepherd January 14 2006, 16:08:34 UTC

Whee! Thank you! ^_^

*happy dances at the quotage* I'm so glad you liked it!

anjanka7 January 13 2006, 07:07:08 UTC

Ooh, I'd forgotten about this! And then I refreshed my memory :) and now I want more. This was a really cute part, and you did a good job of bringing them together and having them hold a conversation about their 'feelings'. Loved Xander looking for the 'you're fat and you smell' expression on Spike's face.
Aww, cute that they almost kissed. Hehe Giles was watching :P
And yay, I love the Dresden Dolls!

flufshepherd January 14 2006, 16:19:30 UTC

I was afraid people would have forgotten about it. But at least you could recognize it, so hope isn't all lost.

Thanks, sweetie! I'm so happy you liked it.

And yay! A fellow Dresden Dolls lover! How nifty. ^_^