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Feb 11, 2012 01:18


The Fighter
Pairing: Dooseob
Rating: R
Genre: romance, angst

Summary: Based on "The Fighter" by the Fray. "The fighter goes inside...he swings with all his might...and she's in love with him. But lovers don't always win." Military!Doojoon.( Read more... )

rating: r, pairing: dooseob, !fanfic

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fluffyxcloud February 11 2012, 03:35:16 UTC
T___T really?

I think this is the first time ever that someone has linked my story to anything. So...THANK YOU!!

sorry to depress you so much. If it helps...I cried quite a bit writing it kkkk <3 <3

I really appreciate that you're a silent reader talking to me! And yaaay! You like my other stuff! THANKS!!!

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fluffyxcloud February 11 2012, 10:27:49 UTC
I actually just finished a continuation! so that'll be up soon >< <3 once i get going I guess it's like word vomit kkkk <3

I'm flattered that you read something out of your otp! kkk dooseob is always ALWAYS going to be my married couple <3 to me, they're as precious as eunhae (which is saying something). so all their fics I treat with as much love as possible. Weird, I know, but I can't help it! even though doo is hot with pretty much everyone kkkkk

yaay! for your non-silence! <3 the louder the better (cwidt kkk)

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fprimadonna February 10 2012, 23:54:38 UTC
Thank you for posting this ff ^^
It's beautifully sad...and the end is so sweet I fell for Dujun's words TwT

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fluffyxcloud February 11 2012, 04:05:22 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! <3 sorry it was a bit..cliched but oh well...ugh, i can't break from the sap!! heehee <3 Thanks for reading!!!

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fprimadonna February 11 2012, 11:01:50 UTC
Don't worry you have a fine writing style so I'll read all your fics soon...now I'm leaving for Berlin...see you ^**^

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fluffyxcloud February 13 2012, 05:15:27 UTC
HOW WAS THE CONCERT?! ^_____^ I saw it in seoul, it was glorious <3 <3

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paintthecanvas February 11 2012, 22:56:05 UTC
My dad was in the military and he went over seas for about a year when I was really young, so I know what it is like to beg for him not to go. This made me bawl like a baby, but it was very go. He's still alive thank god, but--yeah this was very amazing!

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fluffyxcloud February 13 2012, 05:16:32 UTC
T__T I'm sorry if this brought up any bad memories for you!!! I'm really glad your daddy is still good. <3 I have friends whom I worry for sometimes.

I'm sorry I made you cry (although I cried too while writing it kkk) I'm glad you liked it!!!!

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paintthecanvas February 13 2012, 22:07:50 UTC
No your fine! I am writing a military oneshot right now, and I have started to cry and I haven't even gotten to the saddest part yet!

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annys_sophilea February 12 2012, 10:08:03 UTC
Gosh! That was sad.I was reading and weeping at the same time..
I love it and good job<333333333

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fluffyxcloud February 13 2012, 05:17:18 UTC
<333 I'm glad you liked it!!! I was worried it would be a little...cheesy. or much kkkk but it made you cry! That means it's good right? kkk <3 Thanks for reading! and thanks even MORE for commenting!!!!

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Hey Pretty Lady ^.^ moistmuffin February 13 2012, 13:17:23 UTC
Gah! I don't even know what to say! That was sad darlin! >.<
It's not good to be cryin' by yourself!!! No matter how good the writing is! kekekeke
So wright something happy next okay!! ^.^
Anywho, I really liked how you put in smaller details, like when Yoseob was hugging him and you mentioned the indents his fingers were making. Or I thought it was good when the question was asked when he goes back to duty you described his body going tense, like a gunshot went off.
I thought that was morbidly good!
As always love, you are a genius and your writing prowess always astounds me ^.^
Love you!

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Re: Hey Pretty Lady ^.^ fluffyxcloud February 13 2012, 13:43:13 UTC
YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE WHO GOT THAT!!!!♥♥♥ kkkk did you notice that when doojoon sees “yoseob” hes looking at the sun??? kkkk yosob is always blonde and sunny to me kkkkk

totally not sorry i made you cry that was totally the idea kkkk >:D

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