FANFIC POST: What Music They Make chapter 14: "Silenzio" (Twilight)

[flowrs4ophelia]

Title: What Music They Make
[MASTER POST]
Characters & Pairings: Jacob/Bella, Edward/Bella
Rating: R
Summary: When an unexpected conflict with the Volturi brings Jacob back into her life, Bella finds that being a vampire only makes it even more complicated for her to be in love with two people.
Notes: So I've barely cracked open Breaking Dawn yet

Comments

[lunasol28]

Is it like my birthday or something cos I really can't believe this! A new chapter fic from bluesuzanne and now the continuation of this fic which brought me to SOB?! I think I might die from excitement. This was freakin' awesome! My J/B heart wants her to choose him so I'm holding out, but this is seriously....GAH! I can't wait for more. *jumps up and down*

[darinmeg]

This was wonderful.. Thanks for continuing the story. This is one of my favorite fics of all time.. If Smyser had only read you fic BD might have been very different.

[ninety6tears]

I think both teams should be ecstatic to read this. I was actually really touched by Edward and Bella's moment and then I kind of wanted to cry when she used her talent to show Jacob something too.

Overall you really made it feel like years and years have gone by and it's understandable and healthy that Bella is acting a bit unlike what we'd expect from her, and even Jacob seems to have matured now that he's back to being his old grinny self. Even without Bella's superhero moves this chapter would have felt like it had a lot going on in the way of personal development. The way you described what Bella did while she was by herself in such detail feels necessary because it seems very important for her life to momentarily slow down.

[alba_holly]

I don't know this Breaking Dawn you are talking about. As I recall SMeyer announced a few weeks ago that she wasn't going to release a forth book and declared "What Music They Make" as canon. :D

[mrsjoshjack]

"...there were Edward songs and there were Jacob songs."

Too fucking perfect.

Thank you for updating. This story is amazing.